Sugar, We're Going... On A Cruise!? - Comments

Seriously? A guy wanting to die over his skittles falling to the floor and being smoshed? Smh

I KNOW! It's so uncanny I could die.

re-read it! YESSSSS! It brought back so many memories! I'd completely forgotten about the FYE guy! So many things in your story came true after it!!! Patty shaved off his side burns, they put "fucked" in one of their songs (Patty must have given in), The music video where they're on a boat!

Wait... are you telling me they just started selling them in England? Like, wow... I can't even... No Oreos until now... wow. O_O

You made my day. ^.^ I totally need to re-read this, too.

PaGe ClAiM!!!!!

i name it... oreo, cos they've just started selling them in england, and therefore the world is a better place =)

OH MY GOBSTOPPERS!
LOL!
i just re readed all this because i am insanely bored, and (although i've probably already said this several times)Ryan tapped Brendon on the shoulder. “Brendon?” he asked, “What’s PMS?” made my literally cry laughing XD

ooh, and you know you said william beckett looks like a gurllll? well me and my friend lauren were lookin at the pics of him now he's cut all his hair off and looks semi-masculine, and someone left a comment saying 'william beckett turned me lesbian, now my world is shattered.'

well, it made us lol =P

i miss this story!
update miss dawns soon!

susie x

I don't even remember having three stars. That is very happy-making.

okay i enjoyed very much. im sad its over T.T i love and i read it today and finshed it.

hey i started your story today and finished it!!!!!!!!
twas AWSOME!!!!!!!! i really liked it!
okay so heres what i thought.............
Pete- pete was pretty cool, i didnt like how he was always picking on patrick though.....at first i thought that he was being mena to patrick since he liked him....but now i see that that it might not of been the case.

Patrick- i LOVED how you kept coming up with new names for patrick!!! i really liked how he got some confedence (sorry cant spell) towards the end of the story! my favourite name fro him was PMS LOL

Andy- all i can say about andy is AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW he was reallt sweet!!!!!!!!!!!

Joe- okay joe is so in love with pete that its kinda scary...nah not really its kinda sweet that he has a crush on pete just like every other teenie in the world...

P!ATD- yeah i thought that i would just do a group one for them.......Spencer oops sorry Rebecca was tre Awesome....it was so kwel how him and Bobbert feel in love......the rest of them were pretty kwel aswell.

Gee- hmmmmmm i wonder if he's ever gonna forgive frankie?? but i guess as soon as he saw him on Bert's boat FULLY NAKED he forgave him pretty quickly....
i liked how you induced Gee...i thought that it was funny how Pete could smell him and know that it was him straight away!! LOL

Frankie- whats there not to love about Frankie???but i wonder who he loves more....Gee or Skittle??? if i was him i wouldnt be able to choose.......i liked how when he got taken hostage that he almost died from TOO much tickling!!! GOD he must be ticklish!!!!

Bob- bob is just so cute and innocent in this story! and how he always has to prove himself to gee......he made me go AWWWWWWWWW alot...almost as much as Andy did

Mikey- GOD mikey is SUCH a gentleman!!!

Toro-hehehehehe i like how he took joe into the bathroom like straight away!!!!!!!!

oh, awesome ending!
only just got round to reading it because i was at my technology-devoid grandparents house for the last two days. will you ever forgive me?

that was so cool, kinda like the wizard of oz...
and rebecca and bob ended up together =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D =D

well, i'm off to read the first-graders story!
gonna miss this one though...

MERRY CHRISTMAS!

susie x

wow. It's over. That story was awesome! Joe burned the sock! lol genius! And you put The Used in there! yay! But you didn't put the part where Gerard won't let them on the ship because it's no grown-ups allowed.... but I guess it's good the way it is.

I can't believe it's over. This story has become my drug. Everytime I got on the computer I would go straight to my email to see if there had been an update. I will be reading your new story! Cheers!

arianna. dead end.:

Psychedelic Sherbert:

Revenge Romantic:

lmfao poor Patrick, that dream would have been weird
lol i'm off to read your new story, this was so good and your writing is addictive xoxox

O_O
I love you.

What about me?

-cries so fucking loud-
OVER!??!?!? WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN OVER!??!

-sob-
Peter! Don't let it end! Do it for your numero uno fangirl!?

-cries-
WHY!? WHY CRUEL WORLD!? WHYYYYYYYYYY!?

-still crying-

“I know but I just realized – I’m wearing clothes!”
“Yeah, so?”
“It’s just,” said Pete, “I’ve always had this dream of dying naked.”
-laughs very hard through tears-
Oh, Pete Wentz you...

I expect everyone who read this to now leave a long, detailed comment about your favorite parts and such. ^^
Hmmm... Good thing I don't know anyone like that -looks over longness of comment...and continues to cry-

D:

-gets over it-
NEW STORY!?!?!
-cheers-

I loved this story soooooooooooo much. <3
I...can't....believe....it's....it's....OVER! -bursts into tears-

Truely excellent job. I'm going to force people to read it ;D

YAY I love you! I love love love love you!

Psychedelic Sherbert:

Revenge Romantic:

lmfao poor Patrick, that dream would have been weird
lol i'm off to read your new story, this was so good and your writing is addictive xoxox

O_O
I love you.

What about me?

-cries so fucking loud-
OVER!??!?!? WHAT THE HELL DO YOU MEAN OVER!??!

-sob-
Peter! Don't let it end! Do it for your numero uno fangirl!?

-cries-
WHY!? WHY CRUEL WORLD!? WHYYYYYYYYYY!?

-still crying-

“I know but I just realized – I’m wearing clothes!”
“Yeah, so?”
“It’s just,” said Pete, “I’ve always had this dream of dying naked.”
-laughs very hard through tears-
Oh, Pete Wentz you...

I expect everyone who read this to now leave a long, detailed comment about your favorite parts and such. ^^
Hmmm... Good thing I don't know anyone like that -looks over longness of comment...and continues to cry-

D:

-gets over it-
NEW STORY!?!?!
-cheers-

I loved this story soooooooooooo much. <3
I...can't....believe....it's....it's....OVER! -bursts into tears-

Truely excellent job. I'm going to force people to read it ;D

Revenge Romantic:

lmfao poor Patrick, that dream would have been weird
lol i'm off to read your new story, this was so good and your writing is addictive xoxox

O_O
I love you.

lmfao poor Patrick, that dream would have been weird
lol i'm off to read your new story, this was so good and your writing is addictive xoxox

-explodes-
Holy crap.
I just...blew up.

(well, not Pete, exactly, but probably the most manly clothes he owned)
-giggle-
Let him wear girly clothes, he looks good in 'em ;D

Patrick leapt forward and violently shoved the stunned Pete into the water far below (not as far below as it would have been, since the ship was sinking, but it was still a nasty fall).
PATRICK MARTIN STUMP!
YOU JUST EARNED YOURSELF A BITCH SLAP!
-smacks-
...
.............
I'm sorry, Tricky.....
I-I...had to.
Peter is my hero.
Only I get to hit him.
D:


Patrick just stood in horrified silence, and Andy said, “The teenage girl population is not going to be happy about this.”
-nods-
Damn straight.

Pete! I-I-I...I'll save you! -jumps in after wentz-
It's funny how much I love/hate him.
I'm like wentzpolar.

D-d-don't end it....

pweeze don't let them die
this just makes me laugh so much!!!!!!
nice update more soon xox

Psychedelic Sherbert:

William Beckett does look like a girl! And I had him in the begining, only I can't really put TAI in now, though, because this story's almost over, BUT, in the sequel I promised was coming, I'll try to put them in. Except I don't know any of the other people in the band besides, Willy... :oops:

well, Mike Carden plays guitar, as does Michael Guy Chislett. The Butcher (his real name's andrew mrotec, but everyone calls him the butcher) plays drums. and Adam T Siska (Sisky) plays bass. and William Beckett sings.

I'm not a stalker, i just subscribe to TAITV. which everyone sould watch!

okay, hope that helped.

susie x

aww, how could anyone NOT have sympathy towards ryan ross's crying kid face.

but NOOOOOO at you finishing the story this week D=. now what am i going to use to stay sane over the holidays? i may lose my cookoo-bananas.
at least you're writing another funny after this =D

so... panic! and FOB are in da sea... whatever happened to my chem? Bobbert and rebecca should be together, or i will dye my hair black and be an emo kid and laugh a accountants and it will be all your fault (consicer this an early symptom of my nutso-ness)

so, more soon?
susie x

Tweezle:

lol She knows FOB too? The girl gets around! Thanks for putting all of our crazy mall clerk experiences in there! Wow... Just on more chapter! I'm scared! What will become of FOB, P!ATD, and MCR? Will they drown?

Two, actually, just posted together. Now all I have to do is write them...