It All Started at an Amusement Park - Comments

  • jesstierney

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    I knew it!
    She's dieing. Only kidding, I know you wouldn't do that.
    Awwww, Joeeeyyy! I love him.
    I want her to wake up. Wake up!
    December 24th, 2009 at 02:52am
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    whew she's awake :D
    Update soon!
    December 24th, 2009 at 01:18am
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    Oh no!
    you have to update soon :p
    December 22nd, 2009 at 01:44pm
  • jesstierney

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    Ohmygod!
    She died, your killing her off so then Joe can be with me.
    Only kidding, except not really.
    Cute chapter.
    December 22nd, 2009 at 03:08am
  • RebekkahxStar

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    I cant believe he didnt invite her...But I have a feeling he didnt want her to make a big deal about his birthday, but I could be wrong...but I hope Im not wrong
    I still loved both chapters :-)
    December 21st, 2009 at 01:20pm
  • billie_Z

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    loved both chapters =]

    why didn't he invite her to his birthday:( i have a feeling that he cheated on her and invited another girl, i kinda hope im wrong but yea that would just suck.
    December 21st, 2009 at 08:05am
  • jesstierney

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    Uhhhm, Joe is cute.
    'I'm fine thanks for asking.' <---- loved that part.
    Okay, so i hear that Joe is going to be in the movie as a talking dog. Ehrm, I'm not too sure on that, but thats the way I hear it.

    Moving on..
    What the heck? he didn't invite her to the party? I don't understand and I feel like she's going to find out that other people were there and then BAM! Breakup.

    Oh, and I can't believe Brittany died either! It's so sad.

    This comment is all over the place, so sorry.
    December 21st, 2009 at 05:27am
  • chasing pavements ;;

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    Love the story. :)
    And I just wanted to say that apparently, Joe is playing Jessica Alba's dog in the movie.
    It's meant to be a voice-over.
    December 21st, 2009 at 05:03am
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    Ice skatinn, haha
    Update soon :DD
    December 21st, 2009 at 03:33am
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    awwwwwww..... :DDDD
    December 20th, 2009 at 03:04pm
  • jesstierney

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    WOW.
    Okay, so I was gone on a mini vacation and apparently I missed like three chapters.
    So, the date was cute. Very romantic.
    Love the kissing, kissing is good.
    ILOVEYOU!?!??!
    Woow, that's pretty fast.
    I thought that she was going to be like 'we can't do this. i don't love you, this is too fast'
    But the alternative was good :)
    December 20th, 2009 at 06:53am
  • RebekkahxStar

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    Awww her never ending speech was so cute :-)
    cant wait for more updates
    December 20th, 2009 at 06:16am
  • let's make a mess.

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    Okay, I just LOVE this story :)
    Kinda sorta maybe just found out about it today, decided to give it a read and read all 21 chapters in a matter of... an hour? Haha, I dunno, but seriously; keep it up :)
    December 19th, 2009 at 11:26pm
  • RebekkahxStar

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    nawww.... thats soo cute, Joe loves her
    awesome chapter cant wait for more :-)
    December 19th, 2009 at 08:47am
  • billie_Z

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    awesome chapter =]
    cant wait for next chapter :)
    December 19th, 2009 at 08:07am
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    Awww.... Joe loves her :D
    Great chapter!
    December 19th, 2009 at 03:52am
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    Great chapter :D And don't let the article get to ya, you can always try nxt time, I think you're a brilliant writer :D
    December 18th, 2009 at 10:04pm
  • RebekkahxStar

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    I just read this story in bulk and i love it!
    this last chapter was really cute... i cant wait for more to come :-)
    December 18th, 2009 at 08:13am
  • billie_Z

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    awwwwww how romantic :)

    great chapter=]
    December 18th, 2009 at 07:54am
  • Beautiful.mess;

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    Awwww... that was soo cute! i love the roses idea!
    December 17th, 2009 at 10:20pm