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Favourite bit? =
So, what are you doing later?" He asked, trying to flirt. I just gave him a blank look. "Not you," I said, as the coaster car finally stopped. He looked at me and smiled while the other guys he was with started cracking up. After they were finally sitting and waiting for the ride to start, the guy next to Joe that kind of looked like him said, "Dude, you just got poned!"