Cadaveria - Comments

I, Mordred de Bella, DEMAND an update! This is way too fantastically written to be pushed aside. Update, please.

Ayyeee...sorry it took me a while to read - been busy.
Great update.
=]
So this story is back for good now? I hope so...I've missed it.

Love the new layout, too.

that update was awesome :D
more soon please

Very interesting petal. It shall be rather interesting to see what difference will occur between herself and Lestat; if any.

Oooo that was excited.
& suspenseful.
Now what will happen by her drinking the last drop of a vampire's blood?

Sorry it took me a while to update. My internet wasn't working too well lately.

good update though. Your details are getting very good with each chapter.

new reader
awesome story
I love it already ♥
more soon maybe?

Wow. I loved the whole detail in that chapter, it makes me want to know more.

I love this.
"Well fair simple..." I tried to talk with the most careless tone, but then it came to me. A vampire like Lestat, can always read my thoughts. As this came in my mind, he nodded cynically, but I spoke again.
"This is a land of no man, I am just a teenager with personality crisis, and a big imagination. I'm a maniac, a disgusting being who dreams to much, in fact this could all be a dream!" I burst, now breaking apart and sitting back in my place. I was tormented by the idea that It could be just an illusion.

I love the part of being a maniac, which is how we probably are, and how she thinks it may all be just a dream or an illusion.
It's nice to have Lestat back again, I doubt Anne Rice will continue to write about him; so this is a lovely story to read instead; you've taken the character and managed to mold him into your own story, which is magic.

Wonderful, keep writing.

Okay I only got the chance to read the first chapter, but wow. Its amazing.
I don't think I could pick out my favorite lines. They are all amazing. The description is just enough to picture everything, but also giving the reader the chance to imagine something in their mind.
Its amazing. I really couldn't say more. Its original too. I love it. And no one else seems to capture "punk" as well as you have. (Or at least in what I've read on mibba)
Once I have the chance I will definitily read the other chapters.
♥

You're getting really, really good with pulling me in with your descriptions.
xD
I could picture the cemetery in my head.
Good job!
Is the tree you mentioned the one you mentioned in you chat post?

I really enjoyed this.
It's excellent and captivating.

Sorry I didn't read earlier! I've been swamped with school work.
I liked that update...I really liked the descriptions.
& the new name.
Good job.
xD

wow
pretty good.
sorry it took me so long to read and comment (comment swap)

Nice update =)

awsome! keep going!

*dances*
I like this story.
One mistake though....
"Oh your diary is deign of being published chere, A bit to abstract for my taste, but sure captures the scent of a lost teenager who's only ambition is freedom, tré magnific!!"
^ It should be trés magnific
Ooooh the things I learn in my language class. Haha

=)
It's interasting..I like it!
XD
Keep on updatinggggg!!
lol

WOAH!!!!!!!!!!!!

really really good!!!