Walking Through Insanity - Comments

This is really cool, I like the plot line in it.

I really liked this, you've done a good job writing it and it's an interesting plotline so far.

The only thing I don't like is how you reference old adventures, like in the first chapter when Adie said, "The last time we did something like this, we didn’t even go through with it, got in the biggest heap of trouble, and almost got ourselves killed." I don't know if you did that to make it more mysterious but it just confused me.

Other than that I really liked this, you're description is awesome =]

It is a great story. (: Description was everywhere! I adored it.

I didn't particular like the layout because of the picture. :/

I think this really had flow through it, and is well written. Randy seems.. mischievous.

really great story and really unique plot. (:
i love it.

Seance; thanks a lot for commenting and saying it was awesome! xD <3

Bree.Breh; I will!

Sir Elton John; thank you very much.

Nice chapter update soon!

Great chapter! I read the bit of the chapter that you posted a while ago and thought it was good, but this is even better. Very descriptive.

There's not much else to say, other than it's awesome.

xosammich

This is really cool. (: Awesome job!!!

wow, and I just realized I used the wrong right/write. I meant to say write. XD

I think this is really good, esther. Unfortunately, if I subscribe it'll just send the emails to my old adress, so you'll have to tell me when you update or else I won't know. But I would really like to read your updates.

I think it was pretty well written, other than a few times that I found it only slightly repetative near the beginning of the prologue, but I've seen that used in publicized novels as well so it's not really a problem. It kind of reminds me of something that Gary Paulson (I'm not entirely sure if I spelled his last name right) would right. Good job. ^_^

Anyway, that's all I really have to say. Keep at it, because it's really interesting and it grasps peoples' attention (including me). So you better update as often as you can! :D

xosammich

Wow... this idea is GENIUS... how did you came up with this idea? it's GRRRRRRREAT!!
continue!