yea i agree with diana_c15 but overall i think it's pretty great! the story line was awesome as it is so i can't wait to see how else you mix things up lolz ^w^ can't wait for more.
hey i love the story line!!! i feel its a little too narrative compared to the one on quizilla but i might be wrong since i read it such a long time ago. cant wait for the upcoming chapters.
~Ninja Out~