I am on chapter 10, and I'm addicted. this is probably the most descriptive, amazing story I have ever read in my entire life. I love it. I've never read anything like this before.
The plot in genius. I'm virtually at loss for words.
i love it too! but it's only a unit for PE at our school, we don't have any official sports teams for it. ): i want to actually try and start one, but i'm not sure how...
wow, only my sister has read it in my family and it's still a bit awkward. it would be so weird if my mom read it, i can't imagine doing that. ._. but haha, better keep your slashes secret!
Great update :) I love Street Hockey but no one plays it where I live =/
I'm happy my comments mean something to you :) I showed my mum this story and she loves it to although she's hasn't got Mibba (If she found out about my slash she would FREAK)
It's a really creative story and it's not something that's able to be pulled off easily but you pull it off.
Please, please update.