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  • Marissa1117

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    I like it.It's really great.But I think instead of doing it in 2nd person you might want to try and do it in 1st or 3rd person. Just a suggestion.It would just sound better. :)
    December 9th, 2009 at 07:05pm
  • HeartKiller666

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    i really like this story so far and especially how quickly the updates are coming, plz keep it up
    December 6th, 2009 at 05:42am
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