Frankie - Comments

I absolutly love this story.
More soon!?
Please???

I was waiting for this all week!! :))) thank you for the update, the jock vs the geek! and i'm probably going to start reading the kris/adrienne fic, my sister told me it was cute so expect massive comments on that one :)

I like that Gwen found a way to force Frankie and Jordan in a situation together but, the only way for them to be able to make amends with one another would be if Lucas falls asleep or isn't fussy so they'll be able to finally have a proper conversation with one another since Frankie told Jordan she didn't want to see him.
I'm glad that Gwen and Jordan see eye to eye now and that Gwen will be the one that likely brings the two together.
Can't wait to read the next chapter with Frankie and Jordan's babysitting duties.

hahahahaha I cant wait to see what happens with Jordan and Frankie babysitting lmao
I love this chapter!! :)

hahahahaha I cant wait to see what happens with Jordan and Frankie babysitting lmao
I love this chapter!! :)

Hmm bonding over babies, not exactly the best way to have a date... I can't wait to read the next chapter to see how it goes!

they.are.in.deep.shizz. and i was sure gwen wasn't lying and that fan knew at least the basic about babies!! haa that gwen xD sneaky!! thank you for the update!! :))

Oh Gwen. her and her amazingly evil mastermind plans....love it ;) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

haha. kris doesn't trust jordan with his son.
can't wait to find out how baby sitting goes!

Ahh I loved the update!! :) That made me happy haha

Gwen is a catalyst character she helped introduce Jordan and Frankie to one another and feels the need to protect Frankie from people that'll hurt her. As of late, Jordan using Frankie then having a smorgasbord of different women in her wake is pretty sleazy. Quite honestly, the problem doesn't stem from Gwen but, Jordan and Frankie's lack of communication with each other, in that sense, Gwen has to be their median of communication.
You know I love Marc, of course he'd be a good brother and make Jordan see what he was missing. Even if that means they have to beat the snot out of each other a bit, it was bonding. I want to see how Jordan is going to make Frankie see that he's interested in her even after he was out with all those other women and that he had made an effort to see her in Annapolis. Their lack of communication is where everything gets mixed up.
Can't wait to see where you go with this.

This isn't making sense. Gwen was all mad at Jordan for not showing up. Why didn't he tell her the truth, that he did show up and found Frankie and Ryan together. He had a real reason to avoid her. Gwen getting involved just fucked up everything. Personally I find Gwen's bitchy-ness really annoying. Jordan's a good guy but she keeps making him look like an asshole and besides I'm really missing why Jordan needs to grovel to Frankie. He didn't really do anything to horrible. This story is really good though. I'm just very upset with how Gwen is treating Jordan cause he is so adorable. I can't wait for the next chapter and for Jordan and Frankie to finally get together. :)

P.S. Please make Gwen less bitchy and more like-able. :)

Hahahahahaha I giggled so much during this chapter. I loved it. I love Gwen when she says the violence is the way that boys bond, that just made me smile. I love this. :) Keep it up!!! :) :) :) :D :D :D :P :P :P

"Are you going to ask me to dance?" Laura asked her arms crossed against her chest, slumping on the chair.

"No," he replied moodily.

I totally remember this scene in harry potter (i know that sounds totally geeky though) can't wait for the next chapter. I hope Jordan and Frankie see each other again and actually talk

So fantastic! Although, there were some usage errors like "grate" when you meant "great." But nothing that a little proofreading won't fix. I can't wait for the next updates!

"Are you going to ask me to dance?" Laura asked her arms crossed against her chest, slumping on the chair.

"No," he replied moodily.
Someone needs a Midol! :)

"You're an asshole."

"I'm your brother," Marc retaliated and slung his arm around his brother's shoulders. Ha. I could imagine it!

More soon!
I love this story!

YES.
he better be going up there!
updates soon! =)

"You're an asshole, Marc."
"I'm your brother..."

oh my god, this chapter had me in stitches laughing!
"If your idea of bonding is violence, you're all retarded."
Word on that! What is it with the guys? They hate each other, throw a few punches and then they're best buddies again? What's up with that? *rolls eyes*

anyway, I agree with Marc, Jordan has A LOT of grovelling to do! hehe, excited to see it! *evil cackle*

Hi really like this story! Update, update I say! :D

oh man

oh man

what are we supposed to say to this? Jordan's being stupid, incredibly, unbelieveably stupid, but I can kind of understand the way he acts as well. But it's the same old "it's not what it looks like" thing. Things can look and be very different, so much is sure.

but it's funny, because I think Marc's in on the whole thing, or at least sort of is, and he's going to show Jordan his place, I hope :)