She's Slipping Away - Comments

this is very good plz post more

Alex needs to get rid of the drugs! :(
And Zack was so sweet in the latest chapter! :)
Update soon!

i love the way you both write.
more?

Aw zack <3

*whacks Alex in the balls and back of the head* What an idiot!!!! Sheesh, Im glad Ells decided to finally let him go. Maybe now it will get through his thick rockstar head and see how much he needs Ells.

gasp! the drama!!!

Aww. babies.

And I bet those are Jack's arms...

omg i love plz update soon, i cant wait to find out how rian is going to take the news of his sister being pregnant, i bet its jack who is the one comforting ella :D so much drama i love it such a great story. :D :D :D

Jack's arms?

i love this story and how fast you guys update!! it's wonderful!

"yo ho yo ho a pirates life for me.. drink up me hearties yo ho!"

plz post more

It's about a time he finally knows the truth! Wow i have my guts that Rian will be very pissed, but he's going to be overprotectived! Keep going on please!

Zack needs to be okay with this! Ill be extremely upset if he isnt. *pouts* Rian better not blow up on her. If he does, Ella should beat the crap out of him. I wonder what happened between Jack and Alex again. Update soon!

Gah I really love this, keep it going :):)

What will Zack's thoughts be?
What went on with Alex, Jack, and Ella?
How will Rian react?
What will become of Zack and Bailey's baby?
OH THE DRAMA.
"Like sand through the hour glass, These are the days of our lives."
Sory had to throw that last little bit in there

ahhh sooo good! can't wait to see what happened with jack, gaskarth, and ella! ohhh & i wish i was a pirate too...or with orlando bloom....either would be nice haha (:

Aw, I wonder how Zack and Rian will react!

I read this whole story today and fell in love with it!
Great job both of you! :)
Update soon!

Wow, things are slowly different even though all of the sudden she got pregnant! Keep writing! ;) can you write hot sex between Bailey and Zack this time when they were not drunk during her pregnancy????? Lol so awesome story!

this was great as always!! can't wait until she tells them!!

I love this story, but Ella`s P.O.V is alot easier for me to read.