She's Slipping Away - Comments

oh goodness. i bet zack and bailey will do something at this party

LOVE IT ud soon?!?!

I love this story!!!

good story.. i wonder who the guy is.. well, i better subscribe to find out, right?

oooo trouble.

[sigh] I was so hoping to figure out who that guy was.... oh well... gotta go, i have a story to subscribe to :)

poor zack, why does that keep happening?! ENGAGEMENT RING! just saying.

Is Alex a druggie?! NO! Maybe he's buying a weird ass gift for Ella? hmmmm....

Drug dealer? Hmmmmm

Not sure that's the way I would have chosen to wake up Zack.... ;)

awww this is so cute, i love it so far (:
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I have a feeling that Jack either likes her or one of the other girls :( Poor Jack :(

I'll take him! hahahhaa

I really really like this story. I couldn't tell you exactly why, because I feel like the plot is still developing, but maybe that is why I like it. I'm not entirely sure what to expect yet, so maybe in that respect it's not cliche. It could be cliche later, but I'm not sure where it's going to I can't tell you whether or not it's cliche.

Does my rambling make sense? I guess the only important part is that I like it.

aw that's cute alex haha
i really love this story =)

cannot wait till the next chapter.

This has potential....

I can't wait to see where it goes!

Bailey just needs to have hot heavy sex with Zack
haha

i love this!
more soon?

I like this, alot.