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  • ohalterego

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    Oh, this is excellent.
    And how depressing to see such an excellent story without any recent updates :(
    May 19th, 2012 at 09:21pm
  • catgirl1321

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    Heya.... UPDATE. Please?. :3
    January 3rd, 2012 at 11:28pm
  • slumflower

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    I love this! It's very original and unique (:
    December 17th, 2011 at 06:08am
  • PuckConnolly

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    I loved the scene with the Colt Python. Seriously funny. She's ballsy, and I love that. "It wasn't even loaded." HAHA! Can't wait to see what happens next.
    September 25th, 2011 at 01:57am
  • Trig-ger

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    its really good
    September 8th, 2011 at 04:17am
  • no rhyme or reason

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    This is extremely gripping and well-written. I love it.
    Please update soon!
    July 14th, 2011 at 02:18am
  • JustThinking

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    just realised I haven't commented yet -.-' oops.. sorry about that. So far I really like your story and I think it's getting really interesting. Roman empire? I don't know what to expect, but I want to hear more about it. More soon please. :D
    July 9th, 2011 at 11:10pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    getting interesting :]
    July 5th, 2011 at 09:37am
  • Lasairiona Berry

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    Roman Empire?! I need to hear more about this. Update woman! And Eric is all "oh no's" over her still being sleep. Missing his girly-friend.
    July 3rd, 2011 at 02:00am
  • NaiveDove

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    It Seems We All Have To Wake Up
    July 2nd, 2011 at 10:38am
  • NaiveDove

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    It Seems We All Have To Wake Up
    July 2nd, 2011 at 10:38am
  • SHYLA01

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    Rome huh. It's good and sad to see where she's from.
    It's going to be awkward explaining everything to everyone
    July 1st, 2011 at 01:28pm
  • MulishaMaiden

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    That chapter was fantasic! The details always get me. You're such a talent when it comes to detail. I can't wait for the next update! Also, I'm so excited for Eric during this season of True Blood. :D
    July 1st, 2011 at 04:31am
  • FuckNo

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    I'm intrigued. However, I would like to point out that you probably should give at least partial credit for some of the reaper things to the show Dead Like Me because unless it's a huge coincidence, the looking different than your past self to humans, not really being able to die and the way souls are collected are all in that show. The creature form deviates and since the show doesn't deal with vampires, the aspect of the vampires being able to see the original form is technically new but yeah, the first few things are in Dead Like Me.

    I am enjoying the story though, although I hope the writing gets smoother as currently in a few places it's a bit choppy? But that might just be because I don't feel good right now. xD

    Also, another tip? When you want to link to something, use the code for it. [url=put the web address here]Insert text here[/url]

    It'll look cleaner and then people can just click.
    July 1st, 2011 at 04:14am
  • LoveGiR

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    Its so amazing! would be great to see characters???
    May 26th, 2011 at 07:30am
  • ashexblackwood

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    MOAR!!!!!!
    May 7th, 2011 at 05:33am
  • grangerdanger

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    next chapter anytime soon?
    April 28th, 2011 at 11:26pm
  • somebody_who_cares

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    :]
    April 23rd, 2011 at 06:01am
  • Lasairiona Berry

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    And she fought her own battle! Intense. I wanna know why the thing was even after her. And how her vampy stalker is going to take her getting into the battle lol.

    Aaaannnndd I noticed that they all are in fact song titles.
    April 20th, 2011 at 03:37pm
  • NaiveDove

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    Hmmm, sucks that she got hurt, hope shes ok.(:
    April 20th, 2011 at 12:02pm
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