Show Me Your Teeth - Comments

*insert evil cackle here*

Excuse my lovely typos. :)

Hey Melissa,
Just read this story and loveddd it! I like youre style and reading about Eric doesn't hurt either. haha.
Can't wait for more!

Great chapter

My thoughts? You need to update again missy!

Lmao Cami needs to ask him if he thinks she's his bitch. That would be a funny conversation.

But it is interesting that he simply left her in charge after barely knowing her.

Ooooo loverly. I see a lot of tension in that little thing between her and Eric lol. She's not just going to roll over and play bitch for him. At least he's not all ass though.

Awww, that was cute that he comforted her.
I love it

adore this.

Bolding your sentences helps but in the middle of reading a paragraph it drags your attention to the sentence instead of the precious sentence.

But I like it none the less.

Please update soon.

Subscribe.

adore this.

Bolding your sentences helps but in the middle of reading a paragraph it drags your attention to the sentence instead of the precious sentence.

But I like it none the less.

Please update soon.

Subscribe.

I LIKE IT. (: *Subscribes*

Read through it sister dear lol.

So she's "precious" to Mr. Eric hmmm? I bet with all that neck sniffing. Creeper.

It's really good but you've repeated the same paragraphs a few times :D

I look forward to the next one.

I have no clue who is who but I like it so far! I should probably research the show a bit....

Hey, It sounds pretty good so far :)