Whore. - Comments

this is so hot xD i love your work and especially this one in particular awesome job :)

I really liked this! I love to read/write this kind of stuff. Good Job! :)

I loved this. It was really fucked up, but I'd be lying if I denied how much I adored it. Especially the first few lines, with the description of Ryan's scream. "It’s animalistic and raw and horrifying and arousing all at the same time." I can almost hear it, and feel the way it must have torn his throat. You're extremely talented!

That was so raw and dirty. The end was so... I don't know. But I loved it!!

I loved this. It was hot, kinky, and at the end... it was even sweet.
I like this kind of stuff. xD
In fact... possibly one of the best stories I have ever read. It inspires me to write a Ryden/Rydon. xDDDD
Anywho. I don't understand why this doesn't have more comments, so I'm going to whore it out.
Lol... that's ironic.
I LOVED THIS STORY. ♥♥♥

xoxo Mikki Way

Holy fucking hell! This is amazing! It's oh so sexy! XD
How do you not have 70 comments already?!

Damn. I love it.
Mmm Bad Romance XD

Brendon smiles tiredly, nods. He leaves the room and comes back ten minutes later, scooping Ryan up in his arms and gently placing him in a hot bath. “Poor baby.” he says and he begins to wash the boy’s hair - Wow, that's love.

This is amazing. Holy shit, you've got so much talent in writing.

Sorry that this comment can't be longer, but I really dont know what to point out because as a whole it was so hot and well written. This fitted Ryan well. Cum in his hair, amazing detail. I'd have to quote half of the story ;D

Best way to read this?
At a party full of drunk teenagers.
my sis' b-day party.
anyway
that was great
but it was definitely well well written, as always.
The end surprised me and made me a little sad.
:) Oddly, this story makes me glad RyHo's a little indie boy now.
If he was, I'd suspect this was happening to him
and that's not good.
lol
seal of approval!

After reading this, all I can ask in my head over-and-over is w.t.f.
But, it was well-done. Still though, w.t.f.
You described Ryan's need/want really well.
Sorry, I'm kind of stuck...It was just shocking. I read the summary, but it was still shocking.
Great job though.

You don't even know how emotional you made me throughout this story.
I didn't think I would be able to continue reading this; the whole idea made me a bit sick to my stomach because I was so shocked by it.
But I made sure to keep going and I'm so glad I did, because the ending made me crumble.
I was feeling so much pent-up anger and sadness while I read this that it was all immediately released when I could finally breath again.
Gorgeous.

I've probably read this four times now. You're the only author I know of who can pull off such, vivid detail like that [in a sexual situation] and not make it uncomfortable. It was simply delicious. Excellent.

I know this is bad to say but it deffinitly turned me on. This is amazing. I just wonder what if at the end he doesn't com while all the guys are watching. That would be comedy.

This is fucking amazing! I love it to be honest xD
It's just so well written.Well Done! xD

I love the words in italics.
Which is suprising because I usually hate it when characters just say Fuck Me
Over and over again, but the way you wrote it was just w o w

Ryan leans forward to take his boyfriend’s cock, but he’s slapped instead. And he gasps, the room seems to silence. The cock inside him stills.
“Yes.” Ryan breathes, desperate. Movement resumes.

^That shows how thin the ice they're all treding on is.
None of them are sure how far they can push Ryan until he breaks.
I don't think any of them (except for Brendon) really understand how much he wants/needs to be hurt.
Anywho I love this.

There were one or two typos in there but the sheer amazingness of this kind of made them disappear.
This is incredible, I love Ryan being a whore. I love how he needs it. I love how Brendon lets him have it and keeps control the entire time. I love how Ryan doesn't even care who it is that's using him.
I love it.

This is amazing. It was scintillating and raw and blunt, and the contradictory attitudes from Brendon during it. The dominant, demanding one, and then the softer, more loving one.

Excellent work Dru.

Can I tell you something?

Well, I will.

That was the epitome of sexy.
Not gonna lie.

Story/Review Game.

First off, that banner is very well done. It kind of gave me the vibe of a Saw movie for some reason; maybe because the advertising campaigns for the films kind of have a dirty/grunge look. But, from what you've said about the story and the summary, I have a feeling it's going to fit the story very well.

That opening sentence immediatly caught my attention, because it was this raw brutality coming right out of the opening blocks. When some authors try to write a kind of more hardcore story, they try to ease into it but you just went directly to the point. I like that; it makes for a more hardhitting story.

Four men, one time. God, if only he were a girl. He could have five. Two inside, one in his mouth, one in each hand. For some reason that I'm not sure of, I really liked that line. I think it showed just how much Ryan wants it, how he's enjoying being completely degraded. The use of italics as Ryan's thoughts was also very affective and made everything that much stronger. I love how he doesn't really seem to care who is fucking him or anything, he just wants the raw act itself. Even though you don't go very deep into his personality with a lot of description, those italics and the action is enough. Not once does the tone break character or anything.

He feels so used, such a whore. He’s so fucking alive. That line was another one of my favorites, because of the juxtaposition in the sentence. You can tell that he feels a little disgusted with himself but at the same time, he's just loving it.

That little bit with William literally made me gasp, because I've never seen William written as such an aggressive character. I usually can't imagine it but you pull it off very well. Same with Ryan, actually.

I absolutely love how, at the ending, they revert from these raw, lust filled, brutal characters to just two boyfriends. It's amazing how you managed to capture both sides of Brendon's personality so quickly, without it sounding awkward or clumsy. I will admit that I usually avoid stories that are a little more "hardcore" or whatever you like, but this was very well written. There was no awkwardness and it didn't sound like you were forcing yourself to write it. Smut comes so naturally to you and I think that's definitely necessary if someone wants to write it. This was very well done. :)