Whore. - Comments

I really loved that Dru. It was so emotional and raw. Its was like I knew exaclty how Ryan felt. More alive. And once it was all over and Brendon picked him up there was such a contrast. I loved that Brendon seemed sweeter once it was just him and Ryan. Really amazing. :)

First off, the layout sends shiver down my spine for some unknown reason – maybe because it’s kind of sinister and makes me gulp...

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Fuck me fuck me fuck me.

Love the opening, very sexual already.

I adore your use of langue throughout the piece Dru – the emotion and how he’s referred to as a whore – honestly, it really just adds to the effect to it all. The emotion throughout is just, wow – I love how even though Ryan is embarrassed, he’s gagging for more – it makes the reader believe that no matter how innocent he likes to think he is, we know he’s not.

He does take it. And he’s moaning, so loud. Fuck, Jesus. Just. Just give it to me. Oh my God. FUCK ME.

I love how the italics is Ryan – it’s giving us a great insight in what he’s thinking.

He feels so used, such a whore. He’s so fucking alive.

This makes me want to really carry on reading – this is so fucking amazing! Dru, you just have a way with words.

“Nothing more disgusting that a gutter slut eating come like candy.”

This line makes me feel slightly sorry for Ryan – he’s being really mistreated.

Brendon smiles tiredly, nods. He leaves the room and comes back ten minutes later, scooping Ryan up in his arms and gently placing him in a hot bath. “Poor baby.” he says and he begins to wash the boy’s hair.

This story is just amazing. Usually, I’m reluctant to read stuff like this but since a year ago I read one of your slashes and realized that slash is great – I’m willing to read anything by you. I’m jealous of the fact you have this amazing way with words because I don’t and I wish I did – everything you write always has this beauty to it and this is no let down.

I love the way that even though Ryan is a whore, Brendon at the end has some compassion towards him.
Really great piece Dru – love, love, love it!

Story/Review game.

Normally I don't read this kind of stuff, but I couldn't resist. I clicked, and I saw the banner, and...wow. I love it already. It's just so raw and down damn dirty. I felt pretty much in shock when I finished it. The title, it just...yeah. It's very straight to the point, you know right away what this is going to be about.

Oh, God, he wants to feel the bruises, look at them in the mirror the next morning, press down on them while he jerks off, coming to the slight tremor of pain. - Love this line especially. Each time you wrote Ryan's thoughts, I felt like he was slowly going crazy, begging for pain, a masochist. I don't know if that's what you were trying to achieve, but that's certainly the feeling I had. And from that line, when he wants to jerk off to the bruises, it's twisted. But still so crazy.

I also love this one: Whose come is he eating? Whose cock is he taking? For me, that indicated helplessness, as if he can't see, hear, or be anymore. As if all this behaviour and all this degoratory behaviour is telling him he isn't a real person anymore. And I love that in stories, so it just made this even better.

My favourite line is probably: Degrade me. Oh God, degrade me. I could never understand how anyone could beg for that, but this made me think about it. That during this kind of thing, you feel so alive, and you're not thinking. And you need it. It's so raw and just there and it's something you wouldn't want to witness but you couldn't take your eyes away.

The ending made me smile. Brendon smiles tiredly, nods. He leaves the room and comes back ten minutes later, scooping Ryan up in his arms and gently placing him in a hot bath. After such a horrible (good?) thing, it's so nice to see Brendon being sweet to Ryan. I found it very cute, and such a good ending to an already amazing story. This review won't do you justice, I know, but I've never been good at them really. I did, however, love this story, and I am definitely subscribing. You may have managed to change my mind about BDSM. :} Dru, keep it up :D

I love it. I love how raw and just down and dirty this is. This was a fantastic story from a fantastic author. :)

new story. PWP, basically.
NC-17. Ryan is in the middle of a gangbang.
This is sort of a ... reader's digest version of something I've been wanting to write for awhile.
I sat down and 1000+ words came out, so I'm pretty happy.

Happy reading!

xoxox
-Dru