Rebel Yell - Comments

So I've been on a super long mibba hiatus for a while, but i have recently returned and one of the first things i did was had a 3 hour long reading marathon of this! It was completely fantastic and I loved how you ended it! I vote yes on a sequel, but if not this story was kick ass on its own!!! Great, great job!!!! =)

i loved this story =) hope u make a sequel

A sequel would be very nice. =)
I think it should focus mainly on Tre and Debbie, of course.
haha

I can't believe you have 10 stars. Actually I can, I'm just jealous. Two stories and two stars each. You're lucky.
And thanks for the ded. That's my first one ever. =D
*Tight squeeze*
I love you!
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Looking forward to a sequel! I hope to get one. =)

I absolutely agree with xstrychninecity, your third person had tons more description which was really enjoyable to read. It gave the reader a better idea of the surroundings and what was going on.

I liked how Billie and Marci decided to get back together again in the same room they had met. It really tied up the story and any loose events. Letting the reader choose what will happen to the other relationships (Personally, I think they all end up together just because I think this story deserves to keep happy endings) gives way for an actual thought process for after the ending. In other words, you gave us something to think about even after the story ended.

I thoroughly enjoyed reading this story, especially during the ups and downs, and the little epiphanies they all had to do what was right. I will honestly miss this story too, but it's like a pleasant memory that I can revisit. So just think of it that way. :)

Billie let himself wonder towards the window and stare out onto the lines of street that stretched far into Berkley and he sighed, recoiling back into his withdrawn state of mind. Lights highlighted all the different buildings stretching as far as he could see and the bright yellow lights of the freeway ran like a gold river into Oakland.

I'm going to start off by quoting that (erm, mainly cause I'll by some chance copy something else and that would be a mess.), and saying that you should stick in third person. If anything, your descriptions became a lot better in third and you have a lot more emotion, a lot more of a voice behind it. But it's all on your preference and what you feel comfortable writing. I'm just saying, I like your third a lot more than your first.<3

Anyways, these last two were amazing<3 And yes, while it was cheesy, it oddly wasn't. It brought us back to where the story first started so long ago and took a trip down memory lane, and that was something I just absolutely adored. I loved how the room, the scenery, the mood...it was all different and yet so alike the first night their romance came to life. It was a perfect ending to a roller coaster esque ride, and you did a wonderful job with this. You should be proud of what you accomplished, even though it means letting it go <3

And thank you x3 You know anytime you need it I'm here to kick your butt into gear<3

I love I knew that it was ending soon and now I'm like ._. it's really ending soon. But seriously, nah, Marci's acting like a lovesick puppy. Which one of us haven't acted like that? But lmfao at the person and Tre being so awkward x3

WHOA. I told you how much I hated Cheri, but I hate her even more now >.< She ruins everything yo. And Tre being a protective boyfriend/daddy? I really love that. I can also picture Mike being like, "IT WAS LIKE THIS OFFICER!!" and having overly animated motions xD I love these three chapters, and here's to the down spiral of Rebel Yell *hands you cookies and drink*

And love to you too.......I personally LOVED this chapter and i find it really harrowing to know that this shall be the end to one of the greatest love stories on this earth....well technically not but you get my tokio drift.
I can't believe also that LOUIE, the scummy bar stool has done that again.......seriously if i was Tre, i would have comotosed Louie and then turned gay and have sex with Billie. Its all true.
But anyways, i don't know what is on the horison because for me, it is ending perfect but i know that something is going to be like BAM and just screw everything up like a mothertrucker.

Haha oh jeez. Just make Tre the new bus driver, they'll be guaranteed not to get to any of their last shows xD

I'm loving this daily update thing. I can't wait for tomorrow! ....later today actually. 12:10 a.m.
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Billie Joe Armstrong: One whole guitar teaching session. Time may vary depending on clash with any other coupons. *see other for details.

Billie Joe Armstrong: One sexual education lesson to be used at coupon holders discretion at any time

Can I just say that that made me laugh so incredibly hard for some unknown reason? He's like, constantly horny in the story, but in this most...adorable way o.o It's such a different balance that it's really nice xD And her getting drunk...oh jeez. I think her make overs pretty darn good x3

This update was really good! (like all of them) and I'll be seeing Green Day on August 14th! I'll take pics

I quite enjoy the little ball of fluff Billie has become<3 It's SO cute<3 Lovely update as always love (:

Two very cute filler chapters x3 I love how Billie spilled coffee on her x3 Happy birthday to you Marci! XD

I'm so excited to finally get to read the updates! The stupid internet was gone for over a week so I couldn't read or do anything. X(

I loved the last update!

I wanted her to punch Cheri in her stupid little face >.< Because...Cheri's a slut that's just trying to get in Billie's pants even though it won't work. XD And Adeline's so going to squeal =X

Awesome story!!

I'm glad Adeline was so understand towards the entire thing. Something makes me think that she'll slip once a few beers are in her though =X

oh, if i didn't mention- I LOVED THE UPDATE!

oh, Billie you sop but ok then, I'll still have you if Marci dosn't! I think i loved this chapter, it shows Billie in this proper funny side that we all know he loves because he is just my dimond in the rough! I think gurl, that the more you write about Billie on Mibba, the more i fall in love with him. You know, I actually love how you like seek this vendetta out against anyone who discriminates against their fans or even against them (personally and familly members ect). You should like start up a group where people like you, who have the balls to let a fan have the freedom to express their desires. I mean, that comment that that girl posted to you about bands and you were so nice about it, even though she was like 'green day are shite' (oh, bless me jesus of suburbia of the east of nowhere) and up until she was like 'i hate their famillies and their fans because they are posers' and you just wrote this like really constructive 'no combacks' argument! you are legendary and this story is too and if any other readers are reading this, i ask you to comment on this story because this girl who writes this, deserves it......I know that we don't actually know each other but if you lived anywhere near, i think we would be like bestest friends. I think you should move to America one day and become one of us!