Rebel Yell - Comments

Oh Marci...if you only knew that he was truly cheating on you =( Loved the filler as always<3

Loved the past chapter, it was great. More soon????

But once as my memory whirled, I had mistaken Cheri for Marci. Shit! I could feel the nerves make my collar sweat with fear that, Marci was going to come around the corner and catch me out. Bad, bad boyfriend.

Someone's guilty conscience is kicking in x3

“Sweet and sour chicken please” she noted down my order and wondered away, leaving me alone with Cheri.

How ironic, that's my favorite dish too xDD

“I have come to see my boyfriend, what do you think I’m doing here, Billie. Duh, stupid moment for Mr Armstrong, table 5 “ she chuckled, blushing her rosy red cheeks and smiling foolishly at me. “But since your busy with mega bitch, I’ll see you later on tonight” she blew me a kiss and wondered away from our table.

Shit.

That's pretty much my reaction. I just want Marci to go psycho on Cheri, then slap Billie and have him beg x3

“So the fucking lipstick on your mouth is your own?” he whispered, very angrily towards me and I instantly wiped it away with my hand, checking it on my hand to see if I had got lipstick on me. “You’ve been messing around haven’t you?” he threw his cigarette end on the floor and stood, folding his arms in front of me.

Oh Mike....This chapter...just wow. Your detailing is getting even better honey (: Like honestly, I can feel Billie's anxiety and the hidden lust inside the entire thing. It's almost as if Mike knows him so well that he knows exactly who he was with. And him sticking up for Marci and giving Billie and ultimatum is just incredible. It takes a strong friendship to be able to even go and do that. Very stunning job<3

“I can’t wait to drink coffee again” she looked at the spoons of coffee being spooned into the cups and hung her tongue out at it. “But I don’t want a baby dependant on coffee” she smiled again. Suddenly, there was a static noise and a click before the on bored radio, that Mike had set, sounded with the tinny sound of Candi Station blaring through the small speakers.

*cough*LikeMike.....CAN YOU HEAR THE SOUND OF THE STATIC NOISE BLASTIN' DOWN THE STEREOOOO.....I totally quoted this just so I could do that.

“Love you” I whispered into his ear and he gulped hard, making me pull a funny face. Shouldn’t I have had said that?

Not at all, not when he's about to go and do inexplicable acts with Cheri...

My eyes seriously just narrowed at the end of that chapter. Cheri...IDHF;OAIHDFOIH. I'm just going to keysmash because it seems appropriate.

OH! Download Alkaline Trio (: Stupid Kid, Mercy Me, This Addiction, and Time To Waste (:

urghh- if i was Billie's mom, i'd kick his ass for wanting more than one girl other than Marci. Everytime i read about Marci, i always think that you have based it on me, call me silly but it just makes me feel that way!
Anyways, i totally love the update and the new profile....wicked shit! haha- Also nice going there with the Ramones.....i only got into them after i found out Billie liked them, they are sorta cool...i like that one song they do.
Anywasy MORE SOON! i love logging on to mibba when i have the chance and seeing that there is a new update up! wazzup! haha...............Also can you just say if you have based Marci on anyone? Also, are you going to do a sequel? if so can i be in it? I wanna be Marci- haha!

Billie is screewwed. Sucks for him.
haha

she pulled her own hand away from mine and I smiled as Mike walked past us, rolling his eyes and nodding to the stage. Mike is so mad just cause he isn't getting any x3

BUT YOU. WTF. Billie you little whore >.< I never expected that to happen, and for real, I'm in shock right now. Marci's gunna have to catfight her way into this one!

Your sex scenes has nothing on my stories.
hahaha
Yours are PG compared to mine. The one in my sig is the more detailed one, and the other story isn't as bad. Though I liked the chapter, even if it was short and had nothing to do with Tre.
haha

Aww, I'm quite glad that Marci and Billie have been at it again. And I love the unnatural way their relationship escalated. I absolutely love the way the love each other! It makes me smile and giggle at their behavior.

On another note, I'm VERY glad Louie is gone. I never liked him, and I really admire Tre for stepping in and helping Debbie out.

Awh honey that was NOT sick, that was an adorable love scene<3 I love how Billie's got a permanent smile plastered to his face from it. It fit so perfectly into it, and it's so good and cute<3

sweet update- nice lovely way! Sex is a messy subject but i don't think it was THAT CHEESEY!
omgosh- Raoul Mort- what a gooner!

What's the difference between England and a teabag?

A teabag stays in the cup for longer.

thought you might like that!........

Raoul, Raoul, Raoul Moat, lying by the stream.

Police arrive, he's still alive, we're waiting for the scream.

anyhow- you have a good weekend too- my english amigo.....OMGOSH- robert pattionson is well fit isn't her!

*fist pump* YES BILLIE'S GETTING LUCKY AGAIN FINALLY! Poor boy is so deprived x3 Yes, yes they are annoying but because we all know Billie wants on her and Marci always just manages to pull away at the RIGHT time x3 <3

Fillers aren't boring. I really liked this last chapter. All four were great. =)
I really enjoyed them, and I'm glad Louie is gone. And the funny thing is I was thinking the exact same as Tre about killing him and getting another ring.
haha

I dunno, i mean...Adrienne has been the pinicle and basis for a lot of Green Day stories. Imagine a world, where if there had been NO Adrienne then there would have been no birth of any children, which means, where the hell is Insomniac going to come from. Also- just think about some of the songs your probably love the most, songs like 2,000 lightyears away, Last of the American Girls, Westbound Sign (just to name some) they wouldn't exisit.......I think Adrienne is a foundation for Billie and for her to disapear at the time they met (hell, I think by touring into Minnesota enough times, the word of Green Day was spread) who is going to say that Green Day would have gotten as far as they have today.
And as for a story about Billie Joe and Avril- well i think you should definatly look for a goal and a plot before you start dabbling in anything major- push the idea around more, possible readers and see, if its going to be likeable. Thanks for the comment anyways....

woops, i actually pressed summit by acciedent then- name buddy!
Anyhow- making my ronds again...i fink that given time, this could turn into an epic story and girl, the recommendation you made about that 'dangling grenandes' was AWESOME- she is actually megga- are you two like best friends or sommet?
OMGOD- have you heard lady gaga's new song- anyhow, that is just what i'm listening too right now- it is well cool. And that is so bad about being hijacked- not a good time to say that the 7 7 bombings were like this week!- it was proberly the same bastards who stole your phone! But at least they didn't destroy your story.....or your profile, by the way- it is awesome! I freaking love Billie Joe and i so freaking wish i could marry him- i propper want like to build a time machine and go back and stop Billie from meeting Adrienne- OR- i could be like Hannah Nesser and be like 'hey, i'm her sister'- i mean I live in Montana- which aint that far away- maybe i could be here cousin. Anyways I proper want that man.......i'd actually fight to the death for him!!!! Also seriously, think of this for a story idea- Avril Lavigne and Billie Joe Armstrong romcom like yours....I'd think they'd be rad together- what are your views....anyhow peace out!

just to clarify, i make it 00:13 in england and therefore it is your first post of the day! Silly Billy!

Anhow.....Billie and Marci are like my K-Stew and R- Patz at the moment.....so goddamn cute, i wish they were real!

LMFAO MIKE'S GUNNA GO TRIGGER HAPPY X3 But seriously, I absolutely loved everything<3 I'm kind of speechless for a comment, you have managed that much<3

I seriously laughed so hard at the awkward condom conversation and situation for poor Billie Joe. But wtf, her family makes me angry. But I can just picture Billie slurring about touching his girlfriend. Amazing as always my love<3

I loved her mom here, she's so much like me except she apologizes about it instead of ignoring it.
Can't wait for the next chapter.

Dude Billie keeps getting blocked so bad XD I'm starting to think nobody wants him and Marci to have sex ever again xD And her mommy was so casual about everything....Filler or not, these both made me giggle and awh x3