Rebel Yell - Comments

Congrats on passing! (:

But yes, I LOVED this chapter. Billie's turning into quite the Romeo character with hidden desires, and I have a feeling Marci's character is going to be doing the same. Like that whole librarian thing? Not gunna lie, didn't see it coming!

Great update and hey let the festivities begin! Congrats on passing.

I hate New York
haha
It wasn't the best experience I ever had, but I hope you're having fun.

I'm really liking this story.
X)
Update soon

Hey, you're only 30 minutes away from me (depending on traffic:)!!!!!!! Nice update... Billie Joe was sweet in this chapter....I guess getting drunk can help you sometimes. :D

“Rhodes, morning too you” Tre sang aloud from under his bed

LMFAO. Nice way to completely irritate the hangover, Mr. Cool.

“that was a concoction of banana’s to give you a steady rush of sugar and nutrition to the head, Milk to settle your stomach and honey to give you a quick burst of bee-ish energy”

For some reason, the last part about 'bee-ish energy' makes me laugh so hard x3 It's like I can just picture the conversation, and little bees flying around or something.

Great, I’m in the vicious Billie Joe cycle again.

I have a feeling she's going to be caught in that a LOT more than she wants to admit. She needs to just accept that she has feelings that majorly show when she's drunk.

I loved this chapter. I love the interaction between all four of them, and more so how Billie just remains this sweetheart character despite the fact that she wants to push him away. And Mike trying to hold himself up on the bus is this funny comic relief before the storm, in my opinion. Amazing job!

One little typo that's bugging me though, I'm sorry! -_-* You might want to change this; “You owe me twenty dollars Mr Dirnt” Mike glared at the three of us and stuck his fingers up Tre., to "up at Tre" unless that's how you mean it of course!

Aw, he's a cute baby. I didn't know that picture existed.
haha

Anyway, nice chapter. Marci is funny drunk.
hehe

*stops staring at icons to make a somewhat good comment* Momma would be proud of what those hips do ;] XD
ANYWAYS back to the story at hand xD I loved it. I love how Billie had NO idea who Marci was for a great majority of the chapter. At the same time, I can't help but wonder if things are gunna take a turn for the worst once they hit the tour bus (aka first chapter rendezvous). Oh! And I liked how Billie seems to sober up almost immediately when Marci's about to blow. I can just see it as this one sided relationship where the other gets drunk constantly and Billie's trying to help! Great update as always (:

I enjoyed the update! And I'm glad that she's finally having a good time. Marci's been thrown back and forth in work and she seems to always been in some sort of panic. So I'm actually REALLY glad that she's enjoying herself. And it seems quite inevitable that Billie Joe and Marci will cross paths at one point in the night. I just wonder how that will go... <.< >.>

And don't lose fire for this story! Like cityxlights said, it really does have a lot of potential. You'll pull through. Mibba shouldn't be restricted. >:( I'd die if they restricted Mibba in my school.... DON'T LOSE FIRE! :)

You can't quit us now, I finished my first story after getting tired of it, but I still had enough for it to finish.

Nice update. I thought it was a great update

Awh honey! Don't loose your flame for it! This has the potential to go far, I promise! (: And they needs to let up and let you on Mibba more! *growls and grumbles*

And anyways, that chapter was amazing XD I can picture Billie breakdancing in my head and it's a funny picture x3

Hello there. I've finally become up to date with this story! I love it!!! Your a great writer. Very cool idea for a story. =)

Ugh seriously, wtf Debbie. That was probably the most spineless "I'm in it to win it for Billie Joe!" comment she's made. *grumbles at screen* Anyways, it was amazing as always! I can't wait to see how her and Billie react!

Debbie is acting like a gigantic bitch. If my friends acted like that to me, I would be majorly pissed. :( Good update and I hope that Marci is okay. :)

Ooh, disagreement with the group. So much animosity.

I want a sequel. just saying. good update. more soon?

You know everyone will want a sequel, but it's up to you. I didn't want one so I killed my character.
hahahaha
Eliminates any chances of one.
X)

I really think it'd be interesting to see it end with a cliff hanger, and then go a few years later and see how they've both matured (: I love how Trè's antics might as well killed Billie on the spot!

I really like this. I like how the chemistry between Billie and Marci is obvious, but Billie's like that little frightened school boy. Can't wait to see where you take this (:

Ooh Billie. He's so bitter. But Tre makes everything better ^_^

Update Soon!!! =D