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  • life.in.technicolor

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    HAHAHAHA, awkward! Can't wait for more :)
    August 20th, 2010 at 09:31am
  • CanadianTac

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    He called out her name?!?!?!? LOVE that! Can't wait for the next chapter...should be a damn good one!! :)
    August 20th, 2010 at 01:53am
  • Evgeni Malkin

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    i love love love it, ahahah! calling out the wrong name in the sack, CLASSIC!!!
    August 19th, 2010 at 01:05pm
  • NineLies

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    oh my god... that's hilarious!!!!!
    i loved the last chapter and i can't wait for the next one! i'm just waiting for them to realize they're perfect for each other!
    August 19th, 2010 at 07:32am
  • Canadiangirl

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    LMFAOOOO
    The bitch had it coming !
    August 19th, 2010 at 07:00am
  • Jessica;

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    AHAHAHAHAH!
    Win.
    That is like the best thing that could have possibly happened.
    I'm bummed to see this ending soon but so excited for it, as well.
    More soon. <3
    August 19th, 2010 at 05:54am
  • M1295

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    Lovely new chapter! Can't wait for more! Hope you can update soon!
    August 19th, 2010 at 04:33am
  • xoxomusic363

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    "You two are like, pathetically perfect for each other," she spat. Reese raised an eyebrow, confused as to what she meant. "And don't you even try and tell me otherwise, Jonathan," she pointed at him angrily. "You just better hope you can keep your names right this time." And with that last sentiment she was out the door. Reese and Jonathan were quiet for a few moments, digesting the situation.

    I immediately knew what she meant. It was so obvious, but in a good way where you're like bahaha what bitch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :)

    "That was awkward," Jonathan finally spoke with a small smile as he rubbed the back of his neck uneasily.

    "What was she talking about Jonathan?" Reese immediately asked, wondering exactly what Alexis had been so angry about.

    "It was nothing," he tried to laugh off.

    "Jonathan," she said sternly, her eyes narrowing. He sighed deeply and placed his hands on the couch he was leaning against. His gaze refused to meet Reese's and he instead chose to stare at the floor. "Just say it!" She instructed him.

    "We were right in the middle of having sex and I called out your name," he stated bluntly. Reese's eyes grew to the size of saucers and her face tensed up.

    "Oh," she stated awkwardly.

    "Yeah," Jon said softly, rubbing the back of his neck again.


    BEST. PART. EVER. Hahahahahaah I knew something like this would happen. I just knew it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I loved loved, loved this chapter!!!!!!!! And I seriously can't wait for the next update :) :) :) :D:D:D:P:P:P
    August 19th, 2010 at 03:29am
  • BrookieCookie490

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    i loved the update! I cant wait to see what happens after that awkward confession! More soon!
    August 19th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • penschick8771

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    haha i loved the new chapter : )
    alexis is finally out of the picture : )
    please update soon : )
    August 19th, 2010 at 03:26am
  • TSPensGirl89

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    haha yelling out another girls name that will kill the mood all right!
    August 19th, 2010 at 03:22am
  • TrInIgUrL

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    Ooooooohhhhhhhh!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    Damn, if that was me, I'd have laughed it up on the outside, but mentally, I'd be like, "Daaamn, this is awk-ward!"
    And GO JONATHAN! Way to get rid of a bitch!!!!!!
    Update!!!!!
    Much Love <3 <3
    Simi
    August 19th, 2010 at 03:20am
  • skizzle

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    can you say awkward....
    hahaha. i love this story!
    more sooooon <3
    August 19th, 2010 at 03:07am
  • MissSwede

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    WOW...
    Cause that wouldn't be awkward, at all...

    I like how Reese kind of realized that she doesn't have all the answers, seeing as Jon didn't tell her much about his relationship with Alexis. I mean, no one does have all the answers but it was nice that she kind of took what Adam told her and really thought about it.
    Though Alexis final departure - hopefully - was very entertaining :D

    Oh, and rooming with Burish....she has to be a saint or be ridiculously patient to survive that for any length of time...
    August 19th, 2010 at 02:12am
  • MissKrissy90

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    Uhmm..Wow!
    Please update soon!
    <3
    August 19th, 2010 at 01:07am
  • darknight

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    Well that was awkward. And I LOVED IT.
    MUAHAHAHA. I knew she wouldn't last long.
    August 18th, 2010 at 11:53pm
  • RosiePosie08

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    Love the update honey. Great job honey
    August 18th, 2010 at 11:40pm
  • Delete1

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    I LOVE your story :) but I HATE Jonny's bitch ex. :P UPDATE this SOOOOON please? haha
    August 10th, 2010 at 05:48am
  • Jessica;

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    Jon is an idiot.
    That is all.
    More soon. <3
    August 3rd, 2010 at 01:13am
  • RosiePosie08

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    love it.
    August 2nd, 2010 at 02:19am