I really like it. But one thing you did get wrong was when you said that she wasn't using Bella's power and Jasper's calming wasn't working on her still, it's wrong, Jasper's power work on Bella despite her power.
:) yay! lol I love this story! i know I"ve probably said it like 4 or 5 times now, but i do. lol Can't wait to see what Jacob has to say. haha update soon!
post the next one sooooon!!! (: