December 22nd, 2009 at 05:59pm
I Counted My Blessings, Now I'll Count This Curse - Comments
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amazing so far. update soon (:December 22nd, 2009 at 03:30am
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good job! Keep up the good work. :)December 22nd, 2009 at 01:04am
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update soonDecember 21st, 2009 at 11:57pm
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i llove it!December 21st, 2009 at 06:21pm
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It's very well written and interesting. It's different from most fan fics but in a good way. :]December 21st, 2009 at 06:07pm
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the description is better. Good job. :)December 20th, 2009 at 11:13pm
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The changes are good. :) Gives it... more of a feel? yeah, I think that's what I want to say.
great update... still. lolDecember 20th, 2009 at 09:58pm -
Yay! The plot is starting to show! :)
Anyway, it was a good chapter. I like the writing and I like the character. I can see the changes since she was turned as a character.
Cc: a little more description would be nice. Add what the driver looked like. Add more details to the scenery.
Other than that, it's a good story. :)December 20th, 2009 at 09:41pm -
FINALLY! lol
Geez, I thought she'd never make it to Forks. haha
great upate!
update asap! please?December 20th, 2009 at 07:34pm -
it's pretty good writing. I like this story.
Cc: I think you should delve into the plot soon. Like I said before, it was good stretched into two or three chapters, but five is a bit much.
Anyway, other than that it was good. I love the writing and description. Keep up the good work. :)December 19th, 2009 at 05:45am -
Wow.. Purple Eyes? I like it! :D
Germany? Even during WW2? Cool. lol
Loved the new update. :DDecember 16th, 2009 at 09:22pm -
i love itDecember 16th, 2009 at 04:49pm
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Those were good updates. :D
sorry I didn't comment sooner, but I didn't get on here til like ten minutes ago. lol.
Update soon please!~ :DDecember 15th, 2009 at 02:00am -
It is a good story. It is a good plot line so far.
Constructive critiscm: Her dying doesn't have to take longer then three chapters. Although it is good for you to describe in detail what is happening, I think it would be better if you had done it in one or two chapters instead of dragging it out.
I do like the plot, and other then that, the writing it's really good. The quality is awesome. Your writing style is good.
Can't wait for more!December 13th, 2009 at 05:43pm -
update soon pleaseDecember 13th, 2009 at 05:02pm
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Awwe, thank you! :D
i loved it! I really wanna know what's going on though.
Did some vampire find her and think she'd be a good compaion!?
*sigh* I'll just wait for the next update> :D
update asap! PLEASE!?December 13th, 2009 at 12:43am -
This is a really good beginning! :D
Love it!
hope you update soon!December 12th, 2009 at 09:06pm
At first I didn't know what to expect but it's turning out to be pretty good.