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  • Finch

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    Subscribbed to all your stories. I don't think I spelt subscribbed right haha. Ohwell. I love this. (:
    August 7th, 2010 at 04:48am
  • ClairDeLune

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    amigaaa ME ENCANTO EL CAPITULO
    me imagine tu cara de miedo en el water park aii nono genial, y yo como loca tirandome por ahi jaja
    te quiero muchisimoooo y espero otro capitulo cuando puedas (:
    March 2nd, 2010 at 08:50pm
  • finnick.

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    Yessss! Its about time, but no worries, we've all been there. I'm currently just trying to get back into the writing game myself. So don't feel like you have to update constantly, though I wouldn't mind of course. (:

    Anywhoser, aww... why do the paps have to get so involved with celebrities' lives...You know back in the day, so i'm told (Im only recently eighteen), people could care less about the private lives of celebrities, but now its like all people care about. I mean who really wants to know about a seventeen year old disney star sticking her tongue down her boyfriends throat...I mean who cares?? don't! Haha but yah...poor Annie, or you rather. Joe should just put a sock to the paps face. Okay no he shouldn't I lied...I mean could you see the headlines?? Aha. Nah, but in all seriousness Annie is awesome for being so positive about it all.

    But thats all the rambling i have to say for now, update sooon!!
    March 1st, 2010 at 03:38am
  • Bodysnatchers.

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    loved loved it, but you already know haha :)
    i loved the end, very very nice words.
    keep it up and update soonnn!
    February 28th, 2010 at 06:41am
  • DearJanuary

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    Sorry it took me so long to jump on the band wagon, I've only just finished chapter two, but I am hooked!
    January 1st, 2010 at 01:15am
  • Bodysnatchers.

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    love this as you already know!
    great update, I love what James says to Joe.
    keep it up love!

    xoxo
    -Ali
    December 30th, 2009 at 06:49am
  • finnick.

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    haha aww...see, you have got to love NIck [:

    still loving this Annie! I loved the conversation between Joe & Mrs. Jonas, and how you include her as well in this. Keep posting!!!

    luff,
    Bailey
    December 27th, 2009 at 12:37pm
  • bassplayer102892

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    Love the story :) Annie, you rock, keep the updates coming :)
    December 26th, 2009 at 12:24am
  • ClairDeLune

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    cabeza duraaaa si te encantaria haber aceptado el trabajoo :P
    jajaja amiga te quiero muchisimo! Feliz Navidad^^
    December 25th, 2009 at 02:29am
  • Misstashy

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    i loooooooooooooooove this story SOOO much Its aaaamaaaazing! But hahah Its already christmas here in New Zealand I feel speshaaal! seriously, keep it up! awesome work :)
    December 25th, 2009 at 02:17am
  • BeautifulBreakdown

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    I just started reading this and I am only on the 3rd update and I love the story by the way but you might want to go back and check on some grammatical errors. For instance you use loosing a lot when you mean losing.... it's just awkward to read when words are wrong because the mind constantly wants to correct it and it distracts from the potential of your story.
    I'm just trying to give some constructive criticism so I really hope you don't take this the wrong way because I really do love the story and I am definitely going to subscribe.
    -Katy
    December 23rd, 2009 at 06:32am
  • finnick.

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    Dear Annie,

    Okay, so I must tell you that I lovee this story to bits and pieces.
    Its just so very genuine that its real.
    So Jenna....she's a witch with a b, for suresiees.
    The Annie character is very relatable.
    Joe is just the perfect match for her, as all can see. I swear I'm about ready to play cupid and smush their lips together.
    Nicholas is still the stud muffin tehe.
    I like how Kevin and Frankie pop in every now and again with words of wisdom, haha.
    But I especially like how you include all the brothers and families, instead of just focusing on just Joe and Annie at all times.

    So you best update soon Missy!

    <3 Bailey
    December 23rd, 2009 at 12:53am
  • Misstashy

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    I love this story! HEAPS! ITS AMAZING! KEEP GOIN!
    December 22nd, 2009 at 06:57am
  • bassplayer102892

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    Aww thank you for the recognition girlie :) It's no problem.

    Ok, so lets talk! lol I love this so much because I'm dealing with this same problem now with me and my best friend Brian :) Overall, i ABSOLUTELY love this story, it's real and it's not the typical fake "Oh Joe Jonas fell in love with me" fan-fic. It's real and it makes sense in real life situations :)

    Keep up with the awesome updates girlie. I'm always here commenting :)
    December 22nd, 2009 at 06:06am
  • x-believer-x

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    OMG im hooked lol
    I love it the story lines great so keep going :)
    Update soonish :)
    December 21st, 2009 at 12:45am
  • bassplayer102892

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    I cannot wait until the next update! You've got me hooked, i'm going to start "endorsing" your story in mine so keep updating :)
    December 20th, 2009 at 02:19pm
  • ClairDeLune

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    jajaja dios Jenna me estaba hartando es una bitch xP
    te quieroooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo
    December 20th, 2009 at 08:29am
  • ClairDeLune

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    jajaja si amiga claro que va a ser como antes, yo ahora estoy en mis vacaciones de verano por 3 meses :P y voy a escribir noves neuvas
    December 19th, 2009 at 10:17pm
  • ClairDeLune

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    annie me encanto este capitulo, sobretodo porque me paso eso con una amiga jajajaj
    es como que antes de arreglarte no sabes que va a pasar y tenes miedo y al momento de hablar estas nerviosa, pero despues es como si anda hubiera pasado ajaja
    bye amix te quiero mucho :)
    December 19th, 2009 at 06:58pm
  • ilovemasonmusso

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    yes,i so love the 2 weeks off! update!
    December 19th, 2009 at 05:13pm