He Caught My Eye - Comments

Oooo... someone's not quite the perfect little monster we all thought she was. :)
I'll be waiting, as per usual.

Awesome story!!!
loving the drama.

Thanks for all your feedback!

xDorksXareXcoolx: Lol. Cameron and Frostine will appear later in the story. ^^ And yes, I have to agree that Simon's picture is much better. xD

janjan: Aww, thanks!

Hell's.Angel and BBvBM: Loool. will definately update asap. :D

musicgurl35111: xD

Forfeit: LOL. Woah, hit by a bus. xD I'm glad this story worked for you. ^^

I LOVE this story so much. It's so interesting and i'm always wondering what's going to happen next. I'm suprised I ever got through all the chapters as of now b/c i'm a fanfic type of person. But this story is beyond amazing.

I love her relationship with Simon and with Jace. And Elouise was so right for painting Laura's car.

Laura should trip in the street and get hit by a bus. o_0

Can't wait for the next chapter

Bahaha.
They painted her car. :)
Poor Simon, though. :(
~Chelsea~

That's right! You love us more than you know. :)
Update soon or I'll... do something stupid. Reckless. Like posting a chapter that's not a chapter. You wouldn't want that, would you? haha

Yayyy!!!!!!!!!!!! (:
I'm soooo glad you updated!!!!!
It's awesome. I love Jace, poor Simon, Elly is awesome, Laura totally deserved that (:
Update soon? Please? <3 (:

AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH , i love this story so much.
new favorite author

Woops, sorry, I forgot to add one very important thing! ^^'

Erica Lynne Reviews think's Elly's paint dumping plan was brilliant, but had such bad timing...

Wow. I like how this story has a lot of feeling in it. But everytime I look at that character page, I have to wonder who the heck the last two people are, seeing as they haven't made an appearance in this story. xD Maybe I'll find them somewhere else?

Anyway, so, I gotta say that I'm in love with Simon. He cares so much. Not to mention that his picture is so much better than Jace's... He isn't as...complex as Jace, but I still like him. He would do anything for Naomi.

GAHHHHH BAHHH my god u have to update like right now!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Hell's.Angel: Will try. ^^

musicgurl35111: Oh ty. ^^

I just read all of this and I really enjoyed it.
I can't wait to find out what happens.
:D
~Chelsea~

Yay :] Thanks for updating, sooo glad that you did!
&& I hope that it doesn't take two weeks to update!
Although I think I can wait cause you, oh so kindly put chapter 14 up wiiicked soon (:
Update within like a week please? <3 (:

Maisweetlove: She's actually a model for a hair product. Lol. I was shopping one day and came across this series of hair shampoos, moisturisers etc. And thought the girl was very pretty. ^^ Then I decided to go to their web and see if they had pictures of her.

BBvBM: Ok ok... I'll give you a timespan. One or two weeks? But definately no more than two weeks.

A long wait?! A LONG WAIT?!
No, that can't be possible... :(

I really like the story :)
btw who is the Asian girl portrayed for Naomi? She is very pretty... ^^

Thank you guys. ^^ New chapter up.

Please please please please please please please post chapter 14 today! PLEASE!!!!!!!!! (:
I love this story. Jace makes me laugh (: “Like rape you and dump you into the trashcan? Of course not.” hahaha, I laughed at this :] "I'm wearing an invisible helmet today." && this too, that was gooddd!
PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASEPLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE post chapter 14 today! PLEASE! <3 (:

I'm in love with this story. The best part is I can't predict at all what will happen. It's so alluring... just like Jace's eyes, to give you a familiar metaphor. :D
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