So I made time for this. Again, I must say that I love Coke and Hell. They're both so funny, and I found myself giggling at their conversations. Overall, there were few errors, and they decreased with every new chapter. I can't wait for more. (:
I love it! :D I heart Death Note too! You are very good at describing things in good detail, I like that ;D Im in love and i only read one chapter! I'm gonna go read more now. ^^
May sound weird, but I'm happy you updated this story. You're one of the only mibba users who writes Death Note fanfiction and are actually good at writing. I've been subscribed to it twice but unsubscribed due to lack of updates, but I think I'll give subscribing one more shot. (:
I've always loved the main character of the story. Her personality has always interested me for some reason, not quite sure what it is about her though. But what I'm trying to say is that she's a good character.
Your writing is very good and the chapter was just as good as the others you've written for this story. Hopefully you'll update this story sooner than before, I am interested in seeing what happens with this story.
I thought this was so cute!! I love the idea, although there are some grammar mistakes and the vocabulary could be worked on a bit. I think Coke and H are adorable! I love how you described things too! It made me smile. I think you have an amazing story on your hands. I am going to subscribe!!
Oh. My. Fucking. God. I FUCKING LOVE DEATH NOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (Excuse my language) I freaking loved the layout. It looks awesome!!!!! ^_^ Well done.
I remember reading this long ago and unsubscribing from lack of updates. But I think I'll give it another chance and subscribe again.
The story is very good. One of the better Death Note fictions I've read on this site. I liked it. I didn't see many errors and the story line seems pretty interesting.
(I hate sounding like a fangirl, but........) OMIGOD! OMIGOD! OMIOD! I LOVE YOUR STORY! YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY UPDATE SOO- NO! NOWWW!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!! -- -- -- (Fangirl mode: over) Now that THAT'S over with...! I love your story! Update please????????