Is It A Crazy House or an Orphanage? - Comments

  • MusicIsMyLife6880

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    Yu havent updated in forever!!! DX I wanna know what happens next! Update please! :)
    April 20th, 2011 at 01:34am
  • The Molextah

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    Ii followed the link to the sequel and loved the poem. :)
    I can't wait for another update. Hurry!
    January 19th, 2011 at 05:44pm
  • Boomerang;

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    So I made time for this.
    Again, I must say that I love Coke and Hell. They're both so funny, and I found myself giggling at their conversations.
    Overall, there were few errors, and they decreased with every new chapter.
    I can't wait for more.
    (:
    December 3rd, 2010 at 05:06am
  • MusicIsMyLife6880

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    I love it! :D I heart Death Note too! You are very good at describing things in good detail, I like that ;D
    Im in love and i only read one chapter! I'm gonna go read more now. ^^
    November 29th, 2010 at 02:54am
  • Airi.

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    May sound weird, but I'm happy you updated this story. You're one of the only mibba users who writes Death Note fanfiction and are actually good at writing. I've been subscribed to it twice but unsubscribed due to lack of updates, but I think I'll give subscribing one more shot. (:

    I've always loved the main character of the story. Her personality has always interested me for some reason, not quite sure what it is about her though. But what I'm trying to say is that she's a good character.

    Your writing is very good and the chapter was just as good as the others you've written for this story. Hopefully you'll update this story sooner than before, I am interested in seeing what happens with this story.
    November 29th, 2010 at 02:50am
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    I thought this was so cute!! I love the idea, although there are some grammar mistakes and the vocabulary could be worked on a bit. I think Coke and H are adorable! I love how you described things too! It made me smile. I think you have an amazing story on your hands. I am going to subscribe!!
    November 29th, 2010 at 02:49am
  • HippieDays

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    I like the first chapter. I think you could probably use some better vocabulary, but overall, it's good.(:
    November 29th, 2010 at 02:45am
  • Natka

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    Haha I love Death Note, especially L. He's seriosuly cute in a creepy kind of way.
    If I owned him, he'd have eleven kids.
    November 28th, 2010 at 06:06am
  • The Molextah

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    Have I found a hidden gem? I think I have :3
    October 8th, 2010 at 07:53am
  • luvmehatemewantme

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    Omgoshness!!!!!! I love this story!!!! I wish my Death Note story was this good :/

    Pleeeease Update soon!

    Love Alice x
    September 25th, 2010 at 11:58am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    Yayyyz!!! You updated!!!!!!!!
    August 27th, 2010 at 04:55am
  • alexander bernadotte

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    I absolutely love Death Note. This is actually the best DN fic I've ever read (: Can't wait for more updates! <3
    August 22nd, 2010 at 06:03am
  • Mikey James Way

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    Oh. My. Fucking. God.
    I FUCKING LOVE DEATH NOTE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    (Excuse my language)
    I freaking loved the layout. It looks awesome!!!!! ^_^
    Well done.
    August 17th, 2010 at 07:13am
  • Airi.

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    I remember reading this long ago and unsubscribing from lack of updates. But I think I'll give it another chance and subscribe again.

    The story is very good. One of the better Death Note fictions I've read on this site. I liked it. I didn't see many errors and the story line seems pretty interesting.
    August 4th, 2010 at 08:56am
  • Patty Lovell

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    This is sweet!

    I liked chapter two the best, Anything.

    but seriously, I love stories like these, I think yo udid a great job! Keep it up!
    July 16th, 2010 at 08:02am
  • BlackRosesBleedBlack

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    (I hate sounding like a fangirl, but........) OMIGOD! OMIGOD! OMIOD! I LOVE YOUR STORY! YOU SHOULD SERIOUSLY UPDATE SOO- NO! NOWWW!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!
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    (Fangirl mode: over) Now that THAT'S over with...! I love your story! Update please????????
    May 5th, 2010 at 02:06am
  • Airi.

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    Your story is pretty good. I'm interested to see what happens. Update when you can. (:
    December 27th, 2009 at 07:09am