October 17th, 2007 at 04:06am
i really like it so far
you already have me interested and asking obvious questions.
who's he?
why is the character crying?
just.. you know
i think i'm going to subscribe and check back to see when you have written more.
you have a nice start.
stories with no dialogue are some of the best ones, or at least the ones I appreciate the most. I liked how you mentioned that you couldn't remember anything.. because that's how it can really be.
Everything else just becomes a blur.
Well written.