Don't Hold Your Breath - Comments

im getting quite depressed now :(
fuck you drug dealers.

Shet, main.

omg this story is awesome
i read from begginning to
end(last update) just to be
left with a cliffhanger
thats not nice at all

My jaw literally dropped.. I was like what!? NO! But beautiful lie... Hmmm, I wonder what Brendon's got up his sleeve this time.

*comforts Ryan* Poor, poor Ryan. Why has Bren done this to you?
It has something to do with Pete, right?

im very fucking upset right now.

BRENDON!!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU WOULD DO THAT TO RYAN! I MEAN, I KNOW IT'S A LIE AND ALL BUT STILL! YOU MADE YOUR SOULMATE CRY! the next chapter better make things better, or else...
(Im not very good at threats you see)
but that was a good chapter by the way.

I BLAME PETE asdfghjkl; D8<

*Pulls out spork*

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO

*starts sharpening tip of spork*

Be prepared for you to wake up with a spork in your arm if next chapter is DUN DUN DUN

YURRA SKANK!
-attacks with spork-
I don't care about the title.
Ryan's all boohooing.

*chucks tomato at BRENDON!* why? because he's being a douche.

AHHH!!! What the hell is going on!!??? that just hurt me!! what the heck is going on with Brendon??? How on earth could Ryan believe that lie when Brendon was obviously not telling the truth????
What was the sort of about???? I'm sooo confused!!!!!!!!
update update update!!! please please please!!!

(Mibba decided to make your story "inactive" so that's why I didn't review. :( I think mibba hates me...)
ALRIGHT, REVIEW TIME! :D

OH MY FUCKING GOD! Okay, forgive me if I teared up just a tiny bit at the last chapter. But yes, I hope you're happy that you've successfully confused the hell out of me. Like, the one consistent thing going through my mind was "WHAT THE FUUCKK?" In a good way, of course. You're a damn awesome writer. :D But NOOOOOOO!!! Whyyyyy?!

*headdesk*

Update soon, before I become even more of a threat to society. :}

*headdesk*

I'm sososososo eager to see(or read) what happens!

FUCK NOOOOOOOO!!!!!!! BREN WHY!?!??!??!?!?!??!? *sobs* This can't happen!! I REALLY hope this clears up soon, or else I may have no choice but to spork you!! X[ I don't want it to go that far. PLEASE FIX THIS/ UPDATE SOOOOOONNN!!!!!

Alright, you seriously have to update soon, because I'm literally dying over here.
Just thought I'd let you know.
(:

WHAT THE BONER?

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Whattheboner?

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