I loved how it ended. Just like all the other teen romances I've read (don't take that as a insult). I loved how it was scripted and worded. Great way to end it.
This is by far a very good fan fiction...I like how you're one of the few that matter to write about him as a person and not as one of his damn characters (which I love), but not as realistic.
could have been a lot better. there wasn't much conversation in here directly, you just narrated what they spoke about instead and Jen didn't meet his children- you could have added that in.
Please update as soon as you can! I can't bear the waiting, it's just too bloody good! I just love the whole plot of this, it's brilliant. Dont make me become a beggar, I need more. What's gonna happen with Vanessa and Johnny? To be honest, I really hope that they end it. Jen deserves him more. Anyway, dear, remember to update update update!