I absolutely positively love this story! Please update again soon. I think you are a wonderful author &if anyone ever has the balls to tell you that you're not show them this story &I'm sure they will change their minds... Update soon please! - Chelsea :)
I'm not too certain whether or not I've commented on this story before, but I must say that I am quite in love with it. The way it's written, the dialogue, grammar, and the narrator's voice is distinct, yet simple which makes it an absolute joy to read!
I love the way the relationship began between Johnny and Jen. It was unexpected, yet realistic and original. With the direction you took, instead of making the affair dirty, it's easy for me to sympathize with them both and their decisions, not just Jennifer.
The plot and characters so far have been very well developed and the story has an eloquent flow that makes it difficult to stop reading.
Your writing is lovely and I look forward to reading more! :)
Askhabahabsgsbsh. Mind. Cannot. Adjust. To. Amazingness. I'm sorry I didn't comment sooner! I forgot how much I love this story. FFF, I still think it should be illegal cause my mind is fucking blown. Update soon, yes?
I don't think it was repetitive and it had the certain amount of drama in it, so don't worry, you're doing great ;D Poor Jen and Johnny but I think they needed this to happen.. They need to sort it out, tho. Thanks for another fantastic update <3
This story is absolutely stunning; keep up the good work, dear. I'm amazed at your word choice and style, it's all very sweet and perfect. I'm practically begging for another update! Please continue with this story... it's too good to go to waste.