Want Your Bad Romance - Comments

Love love love this story so far
cant wait for the next chapter <3

This story = Amazing.
I can't wait until the next chapter!

to pull it together well, and it's realistic which is the main thing that a lot of people forget.
You've done you're research which adds to the story.
You're writing style is great! Don't change a thing, but it would be nice to see her in her own environment you know, not just red carpets. Other than that it bloody rocks!

what a fantastic story!! Hope you update soon, i can't wait to read!
it's perfect <3

Oh. My. Goodness.... That was awesome love! There were a few typos...but I can't remember what they are at the moment... Anyway, it was really good! The plot has the perfect pace, not too fast, not too slow, tres bien, mon puce, tres bien! ^_^ Gonna go kick a baby because of how good that was.

great update
more soon?

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THAT WAS SO EXCITING.
muy bueno =]

They kissed! OH GOD! It was pretty sexy, haha. Any kiss with Johnny is bound to get anybody all riled up. Did Vanessa not notice Johnny staring at her? Either way, that was hot. XD

Ah, to be honest, at first I was like, "WAIT. WHAT IS THIS!" But then I realised what this was, and I was super excited that it was updated. Definitely love your writing style.

Can't wait til the next chapter. Update soon, s'il vous plait?

This story seems very innocent, I like that. It's all innocent flirting... For now. God, how can someone not be attracted to Johnny? I feel like I don't know much about the main character though, I'd like her to open up more.

I love it! I hope you write more soon.

Jennifer Riley is the shadow in the spotlight.

I liked this first sentence because it contradicts itself a bit. It grabs for your attention.

First Chapter

I first met Johnny Depp through a friend of a friend of a friend or something – that seemed like the story of my life. I always knew someone slightly more important than me, who knew someone more important, who knew someone…

I liked the a friend of a friend of a friend or something part. It seemed so natural for her to be saying that.

I really liked this chapter. It was set up well and was organized. It also flowed together.

Second Chapter

"I've really got to practice walking."

This made me chuckle. It reminded me of something I would probably say.

I liked this chapter also. I could imagine this very well and I could see them standing there.

Third Chapter

There was something about his eyes… They looked at me like I was special. Like he'd never met anyone like me.

I quite liked this sentence.

I think this chapter flowed well together and played out a beautiful scene.

I loove this so much. It's really great .
Update soon , I can't wait to see what happens
next with the two of them.
<3

In the thirrd chapter, It says "the phone ran." instead of the phone rang

i just found this story, and i must say it's different from the stories i usually read (although every story for the most part are quite different from one another).... anyway, what i wanted to say is i am quite intruiged. and what i have read so far was good. keep the updates coming!! =]

loved the update

just found this story and can't wait for more

This is very well written. I like it, looking forward to more updates. :]

I really like this story. Seems like one of those sweet, cute romance storys. Does that make sense? Anyway, I was just wondering why is the story titled "Want Your Bad Romance?"

Yet another update and it was so fun to read! Im loving this whole plot by the way!!!
cant wait for more

-bex