Within You, Without You - Comments

Ha, A Very Potter Musical. "Hufflepuffs are PARTICULARLY good finders." I love how he says find in EVERY single sentence.
I'm only on the third chapter but it seems quite good so far. :)

WOW.
:O

I have an addiction to Fred Weasley.
I have only read the first chapter but I already like this story(:
I can't wait to finish it and you better keep writing!

This story is amazing. Keep up the good work!

I am loving this story so far. (:
I like how Lucy is so unsure of herself. I feel like it's a good match for the always cocky Fred. (:

I still love it!!! :) Can't wait to see more!
Haha, I loved Fred's attitude when she pulled him behind the armor.
Until next time! (however long it may be...XD)

I'm only on chapter 4 but I'm loving this story so far. (:

And I'm sorry, but I'm from Pigfarts and I have no clue what a Hufflepuff is. Rumbleroar doesn't like to teach us about other schools, you see. We have so few students already, and he's afraid they might leave to go other places. ^_^

Ooh, I'm sorry then! I don't know.. I'd just never heard of it before :/ ah well, soz x

No girile squeals but it does get a few aww's and a large intake of breath at the end :))

Love the update

I'm sorry I don't know what a huffelpuff is but I got a rocketship for chrismas and want to know if you want to come to Pigfarts with me and Draco =D oh and I love the story up soon please with punkin pasties on top!

Loved it xP

Can't wait to see where you're going next with this! =3

I'm loving it!

Harry Potter fics are so freaking AMAZING!!!!! Especially those dealing with the Weasley twins.

And at the end of like chapter 3...what the hell is a Hufflepuff??? --- that's not from A Very Potter Musical, is it? I've only seen that once but that just seems like something it might say xP

ANYWAY....update soon?

Hey, so far I'm REALLY enjoying your story, I really love the twins and I cried so much when Fred died :'( he was my favourite. Actually, thinking about it, I cried pretty much all the way through the seventh book, non-stop. It is the saddest thing. But I just have a couple of comments to make, as I live in the UK, and it might make the details a little more accurate. Because, as far as I know (and I'm not completely sure because I don't live in London, but my Mum grew up there and she's never mentioned it) there isn't a London City Airport. The one nearest to London is Heathrow, I think, Gatwick's the other main UK airport but I THINK that's somewhere up north. My geography is terrible. The other thing I was gonna mention was that summer holidays here are only six weeks but I think the story wouldn't work if that was the case, Hogwarts is special ^.^ I really don't want you to think I'm criticising, because I really do love it all and I can't wait for the new update! :D xxx

I busted up laughing when I read the end of the authors not...
My grandma now is calling me a 'crazy laughing teen with my crazy music and internet'
Love the update :)
Can't wait for another :))

So far, I'm loving it. Update soon?

I love it! Fred's my favorite! (:

I love the update!!
I'm glad the Twins are now in it.
Excuse me while I squeal like a little schoolgirl.
........................................ Ok, i'm back :D
Thank for the mention!!

UPDATE SOON!!!

"What the hell is a hufflepuff?"
hahah best line ever...i love this story

This is very interesting. I like it a lot :)
Update soon?

Lucy makes one interesting character.
She's already got me hooked.
Well YOU'VE already got me hooked. :3
Update soon? (: