Electric Bird - Comments

I kind of like this. :)

The background captures my imagination and just runs away with it, tehee.<3 I really like how she has all these dreams but can't stay with one for too long. I'm curious to see what happens next. :) I also like your detail. Detail is a big thing with me, aha. :)

Nice Job.<3

I like this story. Please continue!

I love it. I also like the picture on each page and the whole electric bird thing. Keep a writing :)

I like the way you write. It's so unique and simple, which just makes it awesomley cool at the same time. Update? :3

:) Awesome hunny , everything is great about this story. The plot , characters , the layout! so unique! Im subscribing :p

This is really nicely written. I'm subscribing!

Wow i love this, update soon! I wanna see where this goes :)

I relly relly like this story so far. Better update soon! I like ur style of writing
=D

This is pretty good so far. I especially loved the way it started, with all her dreams and how she outgrew them. I'm interested to see where that will all come to play in the story.

I like her interactions with her friends, and getting to know the people she hangs out with. I would have liked to have seen a little more about the main character in the second chapter, but I'm sure that's coming. Good job!

I like it. You should read over it because you have a few grammar mistakes. But other than that, its very good.

your writing is so simple, but i still love it.
i really wanna see where this goes!
:)

I like the way you write.. and I can't really..comment on the story because well..theres nothing there. Theres writing but because its the first chapter I can't say anything about the plot. But it looks very good all the same.

Hm, sounds pretty interesting. AWESOME layout too :)

Good start. :)
Continue?

this sounds great so far(:
update soon, yeah ?

oh and i love the layout.