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  • eat.sleep.laugh.

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    when u gonna update!?!?!?! im getting anxious to see what youve written :)
    March 16th, 2010 at 09:53pm
  • Nivosity.

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    it feels like it's been forever! But I still likey :D
    March 15th, 2010 at 02:15am
  • Ello Ashleyy.

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    Aww poor Ichabod fell into the pool! :( I love Ichabod and Majesty.
    It's sad her dad didn't come. Hopefully he comes around.
    March 15th, 2010 at 02:11am
  • mindblind

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    No Da? D:
    Apocolypse!
    Can't wait for more my Boston amiga.
    Xoxo.Tina.
    March 13th, 2010 at 11:54pm
  • StallionDuckie6661

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    I quite liked chap 16. 'Chelle's a sweetie. I love Majesty and Ichabod.
    March 13th, 2010 at 10:04pm
  • eat.sleep.laugh.

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    LOVE IT!!! Can't wait or more! i personally love zacky....
    March 13th, 2010 at 08:41pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    really great chapter
    ohh poor Ichabod he fell into the pool
    ohh i really love that she finally found friends other than her animals :)
    ohh i feel so sorry for Linette not even her father would come and check if she is really ok that's really harsh of him at least her mom came and maybe she will finally accept that her mom is pregnant again and will be happy to get a little sister/brother
    i'm really looking forward for more
    hope you update soon :)
    March 13th, 2010 at 11:49am
  • the-quiet-one

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    really great chapter but the action happened a bit too fast maybe you packed a bit too much into the chapter
    poor linette she has so much on her plate that she didn't crack yet is everything :( poor girl
    it's totally understandable that zacky is worried and wants to talk but he has to respect that linette went through alot that day

    well what could happen next......she will have a talk with zacky about stuff; a talk with her mom and dad; maybe she will meet an old friend and zacky will get jealous because of a misunderstanding

    really looking forward for more
    hope you update soon :)
    March 9th, 2010 at 06:17pm
  • Nivosity.

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    Awww poor Linette, so many conflicting thoughts :[
    I feel sorry for Zacky, she seems to be a bit veggie-like at the moment XP
    March 9th, 2010 at 01:34am
  • mindblind

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    She gunna get pushed out of a window! :D
    And then Zacky marries Majesty.
    Lmfao. Just kidding.
    Whatever happens needs to happen soon lol<3
    Xoxo. Tina.
    March 9th, 2010 at 01:27am
  • StallionDuckie6661

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    <3
    very nice love.
    Dr. House!?
    WHERE?!*Looks around*
    I think it turned out to be very nice.
    March 5th, 2010 at 07:02pm
  • Nivosity.

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    d'awwww tis a fluffy chapter.
    Snow like :D
    March 5th, 2010 at 12:00am
  • mindblind

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    Awwww.
    Why couldn't his name be House? Phooey.
    It was awesome. Stupid lady should know he might get hurt for ROBBING a place.
    Stupid ass.
    More soon please<3
    Xoxo. Tina.
    March 4th, 2010 at 11:08pm
  • the-quiet-one

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    good chapter
    awwww zacky was so sweet in this one making sure she was at least comfortable (how comfortable can you be in a hospital hallway)
    hmmm brian is really mean (bad brian, go sit on the couch and be nice) but then he protect her from the evil woman (can someone call bi-polar)
    but jimmy is sooo awesome in this one “Dr. House! Isn’t that awesome!?” that qmade my day xD
    and the other guys are really warming up to her which i think is really great and linette also tries to make the effort
    really looking forward for more
    hope you update soon :)
    March 4th, 2010 at 06:11pm
  • Ello Ashleyy.

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    Woo she's ok!! I feel bad for the robber but he deserved it.
    I loved the chapter. I was laughing about the slap, was Zacky slapped?
    I'm glad Jimmy and Brian were in this one, even though Brian was being rude hahaha.
    They aren't hostile or mean to Linette, so that's a good sign.
    I can't wait to read more!
    March 4th, 2010 at 07:34am
  • Ace.Spade

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    awww for some reason this was kinda cute!
    lol okay so when linette heard that slap, was it because robber guys mom had slapped zack?
    i liked jimmy and brian in this one, it showed well at least to me that they kinda like linette and are making an effort to be her friend!

    in all, if you haven't figured it out :P i like it!
    March 4th, 2010 at 05:46am
  • Nivosity.

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    Oooooh SUSPENSE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    *sits with popcorn in anticipation*

    p.s. d'awwwwwwwwwwwwww I love you toooooooooooooooooooo Lili!
    February 28th, 2010 at 04:21am
  • StallionDuckie6661

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    I personally loved the bit with Linny and how she loves Zacky's car. That made me smile.
    Linny can kick some major ass!
    Oh dear. Cliffy... :'C
    Told you I would eventually get around to reading your updates, lol.
    And I loved them.
    Awww.... Val and 'Chelle are sweet for worrying about Zackster like that. I think Val's speach to Linny was appropiate.
    Hehehe.. "She speaks!" I love Jimbo..
    Anywho, I loved the updates my darlin'. They were very well written and I liked chapter 14.
    =^..^=
    <33
    February 28th, 2010 at 03:09am
  • Ace.Spade

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    wow, that was drama filled with a little bit of action lol.
    so yeah, i kinda really liked it. it was different than the other chapters :)
    February 28th, 2010 at 02:18am
  • the-quiet-one

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    Now you're making me shy ;)
    Really great chapter so damn intense
    Ohhh she was In the store and that guy was shaking while he held the gun that could have ended really bad but Linette knows how to fight *go Linette*
    uh oh now she is unconscious but something happened to the 'gunman' but maybe she will get off lightly because she had to defend herself
    really looking forward for more
    hope you update son :)
    February 27th, 2010 at 11:31pm