Not sure what you want me to write since you already know my opinion, lol. Well, I'll say something anyway.... Meep! Zacky's such a sweetie at the end! And Ooooo Linny's got a secret from Zacky!! Ooo... Bad Linny!! X3
Ugh, why is Linette such a liar? Everyone knows she's not coming back. She gunna flee to Mexico or Finland. Geeze. Oooh! She's prego. :D Sequel soon please<3 Xoxo. Tina.
Damn that chapter was fantastic It was really sad that their relationship fell into such an awkward state, htey are both really harsh to the other in my opinion I feel sorry for both of them, they both have to understand what the other wants in life, it's really harsh of Zacky to try to 'pressure' her with the kids thing (he isn't really, but he doesn't take in consideration that Linette doesn't want kids yet) and it really harsh of Linette that just because Zacky wants kids to just up and leave they should talk A sequel of this story would be amazing I'm really looking forward for more Hope you update soon :)
I really hope there's a sequel after this. That was a very sad chapter. Poor Zack... And Linette. Can't wait to see how everything goes between the two. Loved it.
just read this whole thing and i wanted to let you know that i loved it so much:] you write so well and the story isn't the same as all the others ITSSOGOOD :D!
Haha Linette is so mean to Zacky. But she's definitly right. I'm glad she told him the truth too. I can't believe the door fell found out! That was weird and funny, Ichabod is such an adorable dog. Loved the update. Can't wait to read if Linette will take her little sister in.
A really really amazing chapter but i think i found a mistake: "I moved slowly like I was got in the gaze of angry animal." -> i'm not really sure but i think it sound better when you use *had gotten* and NOT *was got* Linette's word were kind of....harsh, but she didn't lie to Zacky But i think it's good that she told him that they should 'find' themselves before they get even more serious But how in hell did the door fall out is it that old? Ahhh ilove Ichabod I'm really looking forwad for more Hope you update soon :)
Yayyy you updated! Hahaha i think this is one of my favorite chapters. I have no idea why it just is! I love it so far. Keep up the UHMAYZINGGG work!!!!!
awwww. chapter that they: fight, make up, corny line is spoken, and then go have passionate make up sex(: Don't lie, it's on everyone's minds. More soon puhleaseeeee<3 Xoxo. Tina.
Love the twist. Can't wait to hear what Zacky thinks about it. I'm glad she told Zack what was bugging her so much. It's really sad about her mom though :( I can't wait to read more!
damn this chapter is really really amazing and you said little twist that's more than just a little twist it is better that she told Zacky about her problems so she doesn't have to bottle them up and that won't be healthy at all hmm so her mom could get worse after she has the baby damn that's hard and now she asked Linette if she and Zacky will raise her little sibling I wonder does her father know about the 'putting up for adoption' is that why he didn't come? i'm really looking forward for more hope you update soon :)
Holy smokes batman! That's like...whoa. D: I mean, her and Zacky would make good parents but...shiznit. If he was such a child before, how is he gunna raise one? Poor kid. Would barely make a month before going to the insane asylum. ): More soon please<3 Xoxo. Tina.