February 8th, 2010 at 11:53pm
I actually seriously adore this story. It stands out a bit, ya know? - Like he didn't end up with the crush that he's been in love with for the longest time. There are certain points where the reader could obviously predict what would happen next - but I think that's just because you wanted us to.
All in all, brilliantly written, keep up the great work.
UPDATE =)