December 30th, 2009 at 11:23pm
Playing With Fire - Comments
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awwe this was so sweet. I can't wait for moreDecember 30th, 2009 at 10:12pm
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this is so good! super adorable, i love it. you're a great writer.
uodate soon!December 30th, 2009 at 09:56pm -
awhh so cute. cant wait for more.
have a good day.
:)December 30th, 2009 at 09:50pm -
I loved the last chapter, it was so cute!! I can't wait to see where this story goes!! You are an amazing writer!!!December 30th, 2009 at 09:23pm
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This is really good :D
I just read it all, and couldn't stop reading it.
It's very cute! I hope NIck and her get together soon :D
Can't wait for an update!December 30th, 2009 at 09:18pm -
Not gonna lie I started reading this by accident but I really like it. It's really well written and it has great potential I can really see it getting huge. Can't wait for an update. Keep ip the awesome work!December 30th, 2009 at 05:23pm
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:) I like it alotDecember 30th, 2009 at 07:28am
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I love the writing. It is really good. You have a certain style that makes me want to read a Jonas story. Not that I don't, but this one because of the writing makes me want to read it more.
The plot is good too. It's so sad though. I would really hate to be in Kara's position right now.
And I hate how none of them think it isn't their fault. It's the guys fault, he's is the main reason why her life fell apart.
Constructive critiscm: the description of the setting could be better. Again, it is exceptionally good, but describe it a little more. Add details of what the room looks like, what is inside, things the character can see, so on and so forth.
Other than that, I like it. Great job.December 30th, 2009 at 06:10am -
wow love the story. Its so original. I'm subscribing and can't wait for more :-)December 30th, 2009 at 06:08am
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I love this.
You are a great writer and this story is very deep and touching. I love it.
Layla is a cute name.
In past stories [back when i wrote more] i always love using names that arent really heard often.
im writing a new Nick story soon and my main character's name is McKaylen.
welp, I'm done rambling on. Haha.
oh and if you dont mind would you read my story "All My Lovin' I Will Send To You".
I realize its not the greatest but im trying but no one is reading it. :(
thanks a million and sorry this is so long.December 30th, 2009 at 05:35am -
I love this story!! Please keep updating, this is the best Jonas story that I have read in a long time!! Please keep updating, I will be looking forward to the new chapters!!!December 30th, 2009 at 04:42am
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Great story!! Its very sad though =( I was about to cry by the 3rd or 4th chapter but I love drama =) and sad stuff suprisingly(sp?)
Keep updating!!! and fast :PDecember 30th, 2009 at 04:10am -
Ok im back and it still awesome
The sad thing is...........................
I think i like the song 3000December 28th, 2009 at 11:39pm -
Wow ur stories awesome
and i don't even like the Jonas Brothers
Keep it up
Luvin itDecember 28th, 2009 at 08:44pm
Update soon!!!! And Keep the Great Work =)