Does Your Lack of Conscience Tell You Everything's Alright? - Comments

So, this was basically the BEST STORY EVER. It honestly didn't even seem like a fanfic, it seemed like a was reading a real book. If a couple names were changed around here and there, I think you could actually get it published. Its THAT good:)

I started reading Snake Bite Heart With A Bubble Gum Smile yesterday night and was up until 5:30 A.M reading it. And than I started this on and off today and just now finished it. Holy shit that was amazing! I love Alex's protectiveness and Jack's stubborn hormones and August's cynism (did I even spell that right?) and Alice's innocence. It's all amazing. I know I've said this before, but you're an amazing writer!
I could not stop reading this, no joke. I finally went to bed when the sun was barely on the horizon, lol. Just omg, I love this and I don't even know what else to say.

Wow, a month after I was reading this, and I finally get around to reading the ending.
You did fabulous, you great writer you.
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Okay I know you finished writing this in March or so.

But I thought I would just tell you that you are an amazing writer!

This is by far one of the most detailed, incredible, most powerful stories I have ever read. Literally.

I loved every second of reading it.

Keep up the good word. :)

<3

i've been away, so i just got to reading the ending and i absolutely love love loveeeee it!

"Once upon a time, I was kidnapped, raped, and abuse.

Once upon a time, I was called Elizabeth.

Once upon a time, I thought I would die unhappy.

I've finally gotten my happily ever after."

crazy how alice's life has had a complete turnaround.

this was absolutely amazing!! i dont know how many times tears were forming in my eyes. it was hard to keep them back. amazing. absolutely amazing!

I loved it!

<3 The ending was so adorable.
Alex's reaction when she woke made me all :3
I'm going to miss this story.. a lot.
(:

I love the ending! It's so sweet and original.

One question though, when are those babies going to be made?!

Love the story, I'll be looking out for more from you, THANKS!!!

AW! The ending was so cute. Bravo for creating such a fantasic story!

yay, a happily ever after :) this was a really good story.

aww!! that was so good! i almost teared up lol

This was a very good story. I absolutely fell in love. It's not like the rest that make any of the characters seem like total and complete jerks. Loved it!!
xo ♥Josie

This has got to be one of the BEST stories I have ever read. I'm sad it's over, but it couldn't go on forever.

awwwwwwwwwwwwww it's over??????
DX make a third one!
I loved this story! Tis was different from other ones ^.^

I love the ending of this chapter. It's so sweet.
haha the Jack thing was awesome. It made me laugh.
are you gonna make a sequel to this one?
this story rocks!

such a great chapter to end with :D
but are u going to be doing sequel to this one,
or are u jst gonna let us use our imaginations to figure out where they end up in life.
:D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D :D

Oh my God!
I loved the last chapter! So amazing!
But I'm sad now. Why'd you end it? Why?
I might cry.

I love the way you made her wake up.It was so unexpected, but placed right where it was needed. After having read so many heartbreaking chapters this one made me chuckle. Good job. :D

haha i love it what a way to wake up :D
update soon pls