Does Your Lack of Conscience Tell You Everything's Alright? - Comments

Oh my don't let her die

ALICE NO! She should just think of how amazing Alex is & how sad and horrible he'd feel if she were to die, and she would hate to make him feel like that! Update, please!

nooooo! does years with jeffery really messed her up

Omg, what is this.
No.
No.
No.
No.
Alex is going to freak.
No.
She shouldn't have done that.
I hate Jeffery. She would be perfectly fine if he wasn't such a mean person.
Mean is an understatement.

I'm rambling.

<3

PLEASE UPDATE!!

also, i feel like you capture all the characters feelings so well! great job on thatt.

the last line was absolutely creepy. i love this story for it's morbid mysteriousness.

Nooooo! Come on! Live!
*dundundundah!* Here comes Alex, he knight in shining armor! (RIGHT?!?!?)

BTW I kinda agree with the person above. I was just thinking that when I was reading this chapter.

HENYWAYS. Please update again soon! =OOOOO
And tell me when the Jack story is up?? Kthnx. <3

Awwww! Nothing is worth hurting yourself over. :( Update again please?
Oh, and word of advice. Like... try not to start a new paragraph so often.

like.

this.

Because it's somewhat pointless. I mean, I see why you would do it, to get a point across. But only do it minimal times; because if you do it to often then you aren't really getting an important point out because the sentence looks like every other sentence.

HOLY CHEESEBURGERS! Don't die, Alex'll be really sad then.

:o
NOOOO

I'd like for you to tell me when you post the Jack story
I hope someone gets there fast

Omg
That's sad.

Oh my gosh. Noooooo Alice! You must live! Alex needs you! :(
and I would love a notification when the Jack story is posted. :)

tell us when you post it please!!!!! I love this story-even though it's sad- please update this story soon.

UPDATEEEEE??? :D

Updateeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee??

I'm tearing, omg.
What she said to Marie was just so heartbreaking.
:/

Looking forward to more <3

aw : ( this one's really sad.

this one was really good! It was discriptive and had feeling and everything! Kudos!
And a Jack Barakat story?!
Put it up. Pweeeseeee