Forgive me for not reading this in ages! This story got lost in my "read this!" pile. GREAT ENDING. I love the cheesy-ness though, I mean, really, who doesn't love cheese? Anyways - you did really well with this story :3 Seriously. <3
just read this entire story in one sit-down, and got yelled at for not cleaning my room. my mom didn't accept "but i was reading about brian and jimmy!" as an excuse, hahaha, sorry, just thought i'd share that with you. i love this story, can't wait for the next update<3