Aw I loved this chapter with all its cuteness! I hope more sexyness is to come...haha get it? Anyways, I don't want this story to end! Will you be writing more slash? And more soon, please!
I love this story! its so like the guys(: i was dying when Matt was tryna get what was bothering Jimmy out of him. "So... who's fucking who?" -That honestly made my day. Hahaha. I loved this chapter. now i'm off to the next (:
Okay, the chapter Moment was quite choppy, and it was kind of an uneasy read, which was brilliant because it just added to the feelings of Jimmy's uneasiness. There was so many pauses and looks, it was almost like sitting on the sofa in the room or on Jimmy's shoulder and watching them volley back and forth. Then it flowed quite well at the end, when it they kind of figured it out, when it was Jimmy thinking and dialog and movement. And the kiss? The kiss was literally a relief. You're holding your breath with Jimmy (which I actually did. Hahaha, dork), then Brian kind of takes it all home. Wonderfully done, very dramatic and great use of writing style. And, Jimmy's little barb about "this is the most concentrated I've ever seen Brian", is totally true. That mofo is off the wall.