I'm Unprotected - Comments

I got really into it at the middle, but the dialogue left me a little--emotionless? I just didnt feel it so the end didnt come to me as a total YIPPE they kissed type thing, 'ya know?

Good story none the less.

Okay, so I was a bit iffy at the beginning(The summary was kinda "eh") but as it progressed, I really startedto get into it.

I like the relationship between Ryan and Kia, and I love Casy. I was giggling when she locked them in the closet. And the kiss was adorable.

The last paragraph really ended it perfectly.

Great job!