Cheated Hearts - Comments

this was perfect and wrong and how dare you. how did keaton and chloe make better chemistry than he did with harper. how did harper end up with a man who understood her quirks. what happened to their kids. what happened at those late hours with their new partners when both harper and keaton were angry or missing each other. what happened in those late hours when chloe missed her ex fiancee? the one she had to bury rather than marry. ugh.

it was gorgeous and i despise it. thanks so much for sharing this. i'm never going to unsubscribe from it <3 haha

how dare you do this. to me. to keaton.

frickin a, the bit with chloe dore is gorgeous and i kind of hate you for writing it so perfectly. haha

i've been subscribed to this story for at about 5 years now. idk if you're still active, but i have to confess to this: i've never read past the first chapter. yet i've never removed the subscription - bc i thought the writing seemed interesting, bc the character seemed flawed and sarcastic and cool, bc whatever weird reasons. and now im back on mibba.
finally reading it.
barely on chapter 4.
and i love it.
great job, bb

it's impressed the way this touched me. this is so tragically real, and so beautifully sad. i can't even deal with it. incredbile job. one of the best ones in mibba. xx

I don't read anything on this site and I only clicked because I was recommending things.

This was wonderful. It was unconventional, too, and I really enjoyed it. Subscribed!

wow

I will never forget this story :]

Everything about this story is beautiful.
You have talent, missy.

Um. Uh. Wow. This is amazing. Brilliant. Incredible. Take your pick.

read this whole story in one hour, thats how into it i was! :]

lovelovelove

this touched my heart,

This was so beautiful

I was seriously in tears at one point. It was so real, I loved how it wasn't like all your other stories, this was heartbreaking and sad and gritty. The characters were littered with flaws and they still had these points of them that shined through and made me love them. I love how Harper wasn't this huge mega-bitch all the time and that you actually wanted her to wind up happy in the end. I love this, really, I was reluctant to read it at first because it struck me as boring, but God, I love it.

You are amazingly talented, and I love your writing. For the past hour and a half, I have been reading this story. And I have finished it, and I have loved it. :)

Honestly, I am in awe here. You have an amazing aptitude for creating characters that seem so incredibly realistic; Keaton and Harper - they both had their faults, and they both had their positive qualities. Chloe was probably my favorite character (honestly) because of the way she evolved. She was a nuisance; then she was someone anyone could understand. I'm not exactly sure why, but to me, she was the most realistic character of all.

I adored the charm that emits from your writing. You word things so perfectly; the writing seems effortless and flows nicely. The details are perfect, and each chapter gives something new to look forward to. You can draw a reader in, and you can keep a reader interested. Good for you. :)

I'll stop gushing now because I think I've gotten my point(s) across: You're a great writer; this story is ABSOLUTELY great; and I look forward to reading anything you may write in the future.

So, it's one am, my parents think I'm sleeping. But I can't. I couldn't until I finished this story. It was so good. Brilliant really. I adore Keaton and I think you should keep writing forever if it means you can keep creating stories like this.

This was fantastic to read. I loved it. (:

WOW. okay, so i seriously pictured this really really hot guy from my school the entire time i read this story. like, he looks just like the guy in the picture in the banner. and, not gonna lie, that was part of the reason i started reading. haha. but, no really. this story was so so so so so good, you don't even know. i should have been studying for finals today. you can guess what i was doing instead.

also, i've only ever read two stories on this website ever that i actually loved. i've read a few others, halfway become attached to characters before deciding that i really didn't care to read the rest of the story. but no, the two stories that i ever loved were both your stories: glitter babies (like, forever ago) and this story, cheated hearts.

really great job with it. i became so attached to the characters, it's crazy. everything keaton felt was so real and, this is going to sound weird and random (and also, i'm writing this comment while i'm like, half-awake), but i loved how he was a banker. it was such a quirky addition to the story.

sorry this comment is so long. i just wanted to tell you how much i liked it. :')

A very good story and very well written. One of the best I've read... =)

I absolutely adore this story so far.
Your writing style captivates me; your use of wit and naturalness really strikes me.
:]

wow.
so this was recommended by a friend of mine, and i gotta say, the first couple of chapters, i was only reading because of that, but then it got goooooood.
the chapter with the wedding invitation? :O :O
i love.
this is awesome :D
x

I love Keaton's sarcasm in chapter 2.
Lol, great job at depicting it without over doing it =]