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  • legit.

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    i just read this all the way through and to be honest, i don't like chloe. like, she's nice and all but wtf. harper deserves to be happy. i don't like how mean keaton sounded in the letter. D: but your stories are still fucking epic. ;]
    March 14th, 2010 at 06:34am
  • CecilioLux

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    Did I call it or what? About Keaton, I mean. I was so far off about the Harper being cheated on thing.
    Is it horrible and sad that I wish that they would have ended uo together and that Keat could have saved Harper from herself? D:
    March 14th, 2010 at 06:32am
  • not mohawks; robots

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    holy shit!
    that was a pretty badass letter, not going to lie.
    March 14th, 2010 at 06:18am
  • LettersToNormandy

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    Girls like Harper make me sick.
    Honestly, it's hard for me to find a character I truly hate, and you've done quite well with it; I applaud you. It's absolutely brilliant.
    March 14th, 2010 at 05:01am
  • rozydaaarling;

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    I still like Harper. No respect for her whatsoever, but I don't hate her.
    Keaton, however .. Keaton's got so much ahead for him and he deserves a happy ending.
    I hope that, despite all of this, the two of them will end up becoming friends.
    I can honestly see that happening, and I hope it does. Those two would make good friends.
    This is such a wonderfully realistic story that is not at all cliche. More soon(:
    March 14th, 2010 at 03:56am
  • be realistic.

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    OH SHIT. OH SHIT. OH SHIT.
    The tragedy and pain begins. :(
    March 14th, 2010 at 03:04am
  • eight letters late.

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    Harper Harper Harper.
    tsk tsk tsk.
    more more more ?
    March 14th, 2010 at 02:19am
  • XtremeFairy

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    Poor Keaton....he didn't deserve this to happen to him.
    At least he has a good friend like Chloe to help him out.
    Great chapter.
    March 14th, 2010 at 01:06am
  • Love.MichShelli

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    I love how your chapters are so realistic. People can actually relate to them. I can normally predict where the story is going but with one exception for this story. I like letting Cheated Hearts take readers like me away .
    March 14th, 2010 at 12:59am
  • Childhood;;

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    Awww, poor Keaton. :/
    March 14th, 2010 at 12:38am
  • Dodger

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    I liked the last part where we went to Chloe
    x
    March 13th, 2010 at 10:43pm
  • Lady.Orion

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    I missed one update and now there are a zillion chapters! But I'm not complaining!

    What the--? There's so much to take in!

    AH NO! Don't worry Keaton, I'm here. :D

    Okay...I've been very emotional lately, reading really sad things so I'm perfectly okay with letting you know that I kind of teared there. :) I mean, I'm extremely confused on how to feel about it all. And the mention of Chloe just makes me sad.

    Update soon, I love this story. :)
    March 13th, 2010 at 10:24pm
  • helloxthere

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    Awww how sad, but I can't believe Harper did that. I hope Keaton really does throw her stuff out the window.
    March 13th, 2010 at 09:33pm
  • Divide the Joy

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    wow Harper was being a bit bipolar
    I feel a bit bad for Chole
    You're totally going to make me did if you keep updating like this lol ^^
    I feel bad for everyone right now
    March 13th, 2010 at 09:22pm
  • not mohawks; robots

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    wow, harper, way to be a bitch.

    she's acting like its keaton's fault she cheated. uhm, no.

    good update, ps. :)
    March 13th, 2010 at 08:30pm
  • Electric Warrior

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    Harper! How could you? I know you're not the most stable of persons, but this? Shame, shame on you.

    Love your story.
    March 13th, 2010 at 11:57am
  • XtremeFairy

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    I can't believe that Harper cheated on Keaton like that!!
    Great updates.
    March 13th, 2010 at 05:29am
  • fragile

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    Whoooooohhhhhhooooooooooo Harper cheated on Keaton!
    March 12th, 2010 at 06:22pm
  • eight letters late.

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    God, Harper is such a bitch. I hate cheaters.
    Keaton deserves so much better than that slag!
    March 12th, 2010 at 03:57am
  • be realistic.

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    OH MY GOD. OH MY GOD. LOVE THIS STORY WITH ALL MY BEING, ATM.
    March 12th, 2010 at 01:12am