Cheated Hearts - Comments

Beautiful. Thank you.

Oh My God. I read all these stories on Mibba. .I can't say you're the best writer but you've got everything a author needs. Even in these published books, a lot of these authors would never have been strong enough to let Keaton loose his first love AND let Harper be happy, a secondary character. I didn't think it would end so soon though. You should maybe write a sequel. I don't want to see this conclusion! &nd it's ironic how I write FIN at the end of my stories too.

I really liked this story. No. I loved this story. It was real and not cliche at all. I always thought Chloe and Keaton were going to end up together. I'm sad that it's over, though, but I liked how it ended. Awesome story.

Awwww I love this story so much! I like how it wasn't the typical story where they get together in the end. And I like how they both learned. Aaaand I super liked how Keaton had the balls to say what was on his mind! It really taught Harper a lesson. I still don't like Harper though haha. But, you know, that's the way it is. I'm just glad she learned her lesson.

Good job!!

Cheated Hearts was great!
I loved how it wasn't a happy ending for Keaton and Harper but it still managed to work out.
Thanks for writing this amazing story!!

Ah I'm sad this is over but so glad I was able to read it, this story was amazing! I'm glad he actually did throw her stuff out the window. I'm also really happy that they were able to learn from that experience and are happy now. Yay! :D

That ending was perfect :)
truly,I love it
x

loved this story from start to finish, and i love the YYY lyrics that were the beginning and end of it. congrats on another great story, my love =]

I love the ending....it nice to know that Keaton and Harper where able to learn from their breakup and find exactly what they were looking for even if weren't together. At least Harper was able to learn from her mistake and take that life lesson in hand. That so sweet that Chloe and Keaton got together...Chloe is a nice girl and they make a cute couple. :)
Amazing story and I love the message behind it as well. :D

I'm so happy Keaton ended up with Chloe.
He just wasn't a totally good person when he was with Harper.
And Harper was just downright bitchy sometimes.
But it's okay, because I love them all (:
Your writing is so amazing. Like fer realz. I love it.
The ending was really sweet and nice and I'm glad they were able to forgive each other in the end.

That was amazing! It was such an original story and your writing is awesome :)

I LOVE IT,
But I just started reading.
I hate when a story ends right after I start reading.
Oh well. It was different, fabulous.

I like how you've ended this Joyce, I don't hate it whatsoever. I like the message you've brought across, and the outcome of the story makes so much sense, as opposed to some cliche happily ever after. I'm quite surprised that I don't hate either of the main character, even Harper who cheated, I actually whooped when she did. But they were both amazing in their own little ways. So well done! ;)

Wonderful ending good job
:)

I feel a bit empty.
I was like yay update then I saw epilouge and I went "NOOOO" *tear tear*
This story was absolutely amzing. By far one of my favorites.
I was so hoping Keaton and Harper would get back together but they didn't. Which is kind of relieving because everyone does that fairytale bs and it's so predictable!!
At least they both learned from their mistakes and things turned out to become better.
I'm totally going to have to read this over and over again so I will never forget its awesomeness!!! ♥♥

Wow.
Way to blow all my expectations out of the water. I thought it was going to be predictable, but I should have known that you're a much, much better writer than that. I loved it all and now I'm going to read it again. :)

well, at least they're both happy right?
congrats on another well written story. [:

why is it over?
hahahah it was such a good story!
but all in all, i loved it!
and i think this might be my favorite of all your stories!
:)

amazing, well-written story. (:
i'm glad to have the honour to read all of the chapters.
it was awesome.

the twists were great..
and i couldnt help but stifle a little laugh at the sentence "he looked exactly like gene."

yeahh;
fairytales are overrated.
this was awesome.

<3!

I CAN'T BELIEVE IT'S ALMOST OVER.

What Keaton said may have been harsh, but Harper deserved it. Somehow, I felt like he and Chloe would get together, simply because he couldn't stop thinking about her. Aw, man, I loved this. So sad it's almost over.