Cheated Hearts - Comments

He totally has feelings for Chloe. I don't care what anyone says. And it's going to get worse and something big is going to end up happening with them. And he's going to break Harper's heart. And then Harper should get into a fist fight with Chloe and kick her ass >:D Because Harper is my favorite, and she deserves to be happy.

I definitely loved the double update, that made me double happy :D I loved it! Very good as always and I feel like something big is going to happen soon possibly.

The beginning of ...(was it 14) was brilliant. It sounded more like first-person POV should sound, like you were actually in their head. I thought it was sweet. And I think that at least some girls can actually make-believe that all guys think like Keaton does :) . I still think it seems like an episode. But a very good one. I kind of expected Harper to be upset. The "I WAS in love" thing seemed like a perfect chance for a cliff hanger though.

Oh nooo :( UPDATE SOOOOOOON

Aw, this was such a sad update. Is this a bit of foreshadowing?! I'm glad Keaton walked her back; he's such a gentleman. I wouldn't know how to react to something like that, so I could see where he was coming from.

Awww soo sad, I'm glad Keaton walked her back. :( :(

That was sad. I didn't need sad today. I needed a nice happy chapter. But hell, never really get what I want do I? Shoving that aside, this was a great (but sad) chapter. It's sad that Tom died. :( I don't even know him, but damn I'm so sad. XD

New story? Whoopeee.

I feel so bad for Chloe

I kinda wanted to cry even though you know she didnn't say much

It's just the fact that Keaton sad her tears were pure

I'm totally going to check out your other story

Awe..poor Chloe.
Great update.

oh, Chloe Dore.

brillance as always
x

Every chapter seems like a different episode. You should work to trying to make it seem like one whole story. Since the last chapter, I believe that you are a pure writer. People just have a good storyline. Period. You can create words beautifully in a unique way. I loved it.

I love Keaton's dark, sarcastic humour, it brings tears of joy to my eyes. What I loved more was this chapter as a whole, that in itself brought tears to my eyes, I didn't see any of it coming. Poor Chloe Dore :(

I seriously love this story so much! I'm really sad Harper and Keaton aren't going to end up together, though-- they're pretty adorable :)

Ahhh I loved the update :) I don't have a solution sorry, maybe it will be better in a couple day?

I haven't commented since I first found the story but i've finally read it. And it is awesome. I love Harper and i'm very jealous because I always wanted red hair.

lol I thought that was what happened between her and Josh.

I love this story! It is very original, which is rare. Keep up the good work!

I love how Keaton was like, "Awesome!"
and it's cute that he's taking care of her when she's "dying". :3

That was so totally adorable. (:
I mean, I honestly expected that the night they fought, but it's funnier with Harper admitting it.
And Keaton's reaction - Priceless.

Lol Oh Harper is so funny when she's gets sick.
Great update.