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  • yo.thats.illogical.

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    Hey I like this story its good

    just a pointer: if you split the writing up into paragraphs it makes it easier for us to read ha, and also there are capital letters all over the place

    but yeah as I said I really do like it so far, so keep updating
    January 5th, 2010 at 10:14am
  • unbroken13

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    I do not think you suck at writing.
    I love it.
    January 4th, 2010 at 11:58am
  • unbroken13

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    miley is a witch...in this
    January 4th, 2010 at 12:12am
  • unbroken13

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    Update soon.
    January 1st, 2010 at 07:24pm
  • unbroken13

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    Please write this!
    January 1st, 2010 at 05:18am
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