Creatures - Comments

It's a nice chapter, really. I like the plot.

There are a few typos that you might have to re-look; places where a letter or something is missing. But the plot is interesting. There's something wrong with the image you have as a page background and that photobucket little thing is annoying. But apart from that, yeah. This was cool. Update soon, kay?

Nice! I really like how this starts out! Just a normal day, going to bed and everything and then all that's good is suddenly turned into a whole unknown world of interest.

I'm also writing a story about aliens. Its called "No Ordinary Life" If you want to check it out. I think you would like it :)

Oh my gosh!

I LOVED this one! It's so interesting.

I love how the aliens like sea glass. I want more!

I didn't really spot any errors in this one. The only thing that kinda annoyed me was the layout. I personally like layouts that have the story in the center instead of the sides, since my eyes naturally go to the center. I liked how the banner had humor in it. Please write more!

Hmm an interesting start.
Aliens don't normally interest me but this one...it's intriguing.
I think the way you're writing it, as a flashback, is definitely the best way to write the story, it seems more realistic.
Also the use of the narration is really effective.
Please update i'm intrigued to see where this story will go.
It has a lot of potential.

^_^

So interesting! Keep trying to write more, I'll read it.
If you're interested, maybe try reading the book Slaughterhouse-five by Kurt Vonnegut. One of the main parts in that story is that the main character believes he was abducted by aliens. It's a great story.