Dear Mr.Emo - Comments

wow there are way more than 4 comments. first chapter then?
the story seems like it'll be good, so write more soon please( :

There are many more than 4 comments on here. I am wondering where that next chapter is.

I like it so far, keep up the good work!

i did like the older story, but i think this new one will be just as wonderful :)

I haven't read the story the first time you wrote it, but this version seems good! I wouldn't ahve it any other way! Update soon!
*I subscribed*

Yay! I like this :)

hiya. please update. i love this. xD

If this were facebook, I would like this :D

I think re-doing it will be a fine idea. I'm really looking forward to reading it. :)

I like this (: update when you can :D

You might want to go re-read and edit this story.
a little bit of the first chapter seems rushed, in chapter two, you spelled "disgust" like "discus." and chapter four, "overreacted" not "over reacted" and a few other stuff.

Ooh, and especially chapter 4.
The idea of them making up and being friends again is sound, but the execution was a little...off.
It was a little rushed, almost a too-good-to-be-true thing.
I don't know if you've thought out what all happened between them (cause I'm writing this as i go through the chapters), but you might want to think about revising that.

Also, the flashbacks are a little...awkward. you might want to have her thinking "I remember that time when such and happened, where he did this, i did that. And i remember that other thing happening, blah blah blah." you get the idea.

you've got a decent work-in-the-making.
just remember to edit, edit and then edit it again.

...also, please realize that these are only suggestions, certainly not demands or insults, and are meant to help you write better. (constructive criticism ftw!)

Post more soon please :3

I really like it please updated (:

really good story!!! I enjoy it so much!! It's addicting

6th chapter: AMAZING!!!!!!! You, totally, need to write more!!!!!!

oh. my. god.
i'm in love with it already!
please update soon!!

Just started reading this. Love this whole story and everything but wanted to let you know that no sibling relationship is that perfect. My sister is only a year older than me and everyone thinks that we are twins. Let me tell you, we are not. I don't know if i could stand living alone with my sister without parents to us from ripping eachother's throuts out. I love my sister and we can have great times, but we can both be horrible people sometimes. We also have different circles of friends and don't hang out with eachothers friends. Though maybe that's just me and my sister, maybe others have better relationships, i don't know. Really love this story ♥

LOVE IT!! Please write more! It different from all the other stories I've read on Mibba. It's not the same arranged marriage stuf everyone does and I am absolutely in LOVE with it!

HOLY CRAP. you have to write the next chapter, like, SOON!!!!!! i'll go through story withdrawal!

I love it doll.

More please?