White Rose On His Grave - Comments

Wow. This reminds me so much of the way I acted when my grandpa died last summer.
You're an amazing writer, and I can only hope to be as good as you someday.

Sorry to hear about your father, I'm sure he was a great man.

gosh, made me cry.
sorry about your dad.
I know how hard it can be to loose someone you love.
keep him your heart(though you already know that I'm sure)

Wow this brought me to tears, it is amazing!

vicious sex.:

:cheese:
I dunno, words.
Woah.
:cheese:
You're an amazing writer. I hope to be as good as you someday.
Oh my goodness.

Why thank you so much (:

:cheese:
I dunno, words.
Woah.
:cheese:
You're an amazing writer. I hope to be as good as you someday.
Oh my goodness.

I cried, it was so touching.
I'm sorry for your loss.

i didn't cry when reading this, but it's the saddest thing i read in my life.
it made me feel like when my dad died.
i was seven years old.

but this was beautiful.
i'm so sorry.

I'm so sorry about your dad. This is possibly one of the sadder stories I've read on Mibba. It made me cry.
You have so much talent, this was amazing. Sad... but amazing.

I started crying when I read this...

I never cry! I know how you feel, my grandfather died two months ago...

The past few months were painful for me.

Im sorry to hear about your father.
I can't sit here and say i know how you feel, because i've never had anyone close pass away, and i don't really know what to say because I haven't got any experience in the matter...

But if it makes you feel any better (which it probably won't)
If your dad read that he would be very proud of you (:

that was a really good story. you have a nack for writing good dramatic stories.
I liked the surprise of finding the rose at the bottom of the page, and I also enjoy the song "Hear You Me" by Jimmy Eat World as well. It's helped me get over a death, as well.

That was a gripping emotional story.. wow. good job.

Thank you all so much!

you're a really amazing writer. the images you created were so vivid, i felt as if i were there. great, great job.

Wow, I cried a little.
So sorry about you're dad.
Even if I am a little late on reading this, I am so sorry about you're dad.

I can`t stop crying... I`m not ever reading something like this this late at night...I can`t even get a tissue...okay,I`m out of here and I`m stopping thinking about it...
sorry about your dad,and I`m happy that you`re happy with dujo. ^^
loviez and hugs,Neffy

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omg... i like... almost started crying, this is the second time i read this, i cried the first time. omg, it's so sad.

i'm so sorry for your lose,
i know what it feels like to lose an important member of your family<3

Thank you... And I'm sorry for your loss *hugs*

omg... i like... almost started crying, this is the second time i read this, i cried the first time. omg, it's so sad.

i'm so sorry for your lose,
i know what it feels like to lose an important member of your family<3

That was so beautiful. It sounded like you had a wonderful relationship with your father. I lost my grandfather, I know it isn't as bad, but I understand the feeling of confusion you described so perfectly.
I am sure that will ring true to any who have lost a loved one, your descriptions were so perfect. It brought me to tears.
It was an excellent piece of writing.

I'm sorry.

McFlyMadWriter xx:

Aww i'm so sorry xx this story made me cry xx it's lovely the way you have written it xx
Your dad would love it and be really proud of you xx it made me cry xx i'm so sorry x

Thank you. Don't worry about me, I'm fine (:
And thanks for your nice thoughts...