White Rose On His Grave - Comments

  • McFlyMadWriter xx

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    Aww i'm so sorry xx this story made me cry xx it's lovely the way you have written it xx
    Your dad would love it and be really proud of you xx it made me cry xx i'm so sorry x
    June 7th, 2008 at 01:50am
  • Josipa

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    Thank you, dear Mibbian (:
    It wasn't hard to write the story, 'cause as you said, it came straight from my heart (:
    April 17th, 2008 at 08:17am
  • Angelus.

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    That was beautiful. I can't really tell you how I feel right now!
    This is just an amazing thing to do in a sort of.. tribute, to your Daddy.
    Fantastically well written, you must be so proud to be able to write like that, truly from the heart.

    xoxoxoxox
    April 16th, 2008 at 08:50pm
  • Josipa

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    Helena, thank YOU (:
    Every word you said touched my heart - they're full of love and beyond.
    What happened almost 10 months ago is still kinda in the mist to me; I have no problems talking about it, but thinking for myself.
    I'm aware of that; I know he's gone but I just can't accept it.

    You know what I mean. :hug:
    April 15th, 2008 at 09:38am
  • helen

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    I can't believe I didn't see this before.

    It was more beautiful than any of your works I've read. It was so sincere and I felt like it was talking out to me, because I could relate easily.
    Its beauty made me cry. Not the neauty of the story, but the beauty of your words. They came alive, blinking and moving across the screen, flashing an array of emotions. And emitting the most important one, love.

    I cried. I loved it. Then I cried some more. It's just amazing. And pure. And personal.
    And it was wonderful of you to share this with everyone. Seriously. I admire your courage.
    I wrote something similar, but still haven't gained the courage to post it. Not because it's too personal, but because I'm ashamed.

    It's a really amazing story and I'd really like to hug you know, but this will have to suffice.

    :hug:

    Thank you :}
    April 14th, 2008 at 06:44pm
  • Josipa

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    This story is beautiful.
    I know the feeling of losing your dad.
    It sucks, majorly.
    I'm glad you can write about it though and share with the world how much he meant to you, though.
    It's awesome.
    Thank you so much (: That's all I can say; it's not much but it's sincere (:
    April 14th, 2008 at 09:28am
  • No.Point.Now

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    This story is beautiful.
    I know the feeling of losing your dad.
    It sucks, majorly.
    I'm glad you can write about it though and share with the world how much he meant to you, though.
    It's awesome.
    April 14th, 2008 at 03:33am
  • Josipa

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    hrvatka; dreamer.:
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    Ah geeze, Josipa. This is... magnificent. And to say I had never read your stuff before. Here I am, just browsing, and I'm bored out of my mind. I clicked on your profile and looked at your stories and realized I had never read your stuff before. So I picked out the one with the most capturing title and decided to read it. Really, it made me cry. Not tear up, but cry. It made me think of my friend when she died (who I also wrote a one-shot tribute to). Although, losing a parent must be so much harder. I know this happened a while ago but I still hope that you're doing okay. I know that you're strong. :arms:
    Aw, Tas, thank you (:
    April 10th, 2008 at 09:30am
  • hrvatka; candy.

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    Ah geeze, Josipa. This is... magnificent. And to say I had never read your stuff before. Here I am, just browsing, and I'm bored out of my mind. I clicked on your profile and looked at your stories and realized I had never read your stuff before. So I picked out the one with the most capturing title and decided to read it. Really, it made me cry. Not tear up, but cry. It made me think of my friend when she died (who I also wrote a one-shot tribute to). Although, losing a parent must be so much harder. I know this happened a while ago but I still hope that you're doing okay. I know that you're strong. :arms:
    April 9th, 2008 at 03:51pm
  • Josipa

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    :shock: Your comments really blew me away. I'm grinning like a psycho XD
    April 3rd, 2008 at 10:37am
  • Scars.

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    That is too beautiful for words.
    I... I can't even find anything to quote.
    Dear me, it was as if a fairy with writing powers wrote this... :shock:
    Yes, that sounded weird, but in other words; you are very talented.
    April 3rd, 2008 at 05:08am
  • Josipa

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    Thank you, both. Don't worry about me, really. I have people who love me (:
    Of course, it's not the same without my dad and I'd give anything to bring him back but...
    March 19th, 2008 at 08:22pm
  • Morticia Scarypants.

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    This made me cry - it was so sad
    It reminds me of my dad, a bit
    i think this is really well written, you've done an amazing job!
    I'm sorry about your dad
    -hug-
    I'm all emotional now *slaps self*
    March 16th, 2008 at 10:18pm
  • Dana Scully

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    Hey Josipa, I'm really, really very sorry about your papa, I don't really know what it's like to lose someone, but I do know how it can affect people
    March 12th, 2008 at 10:07pm
  • Josipa

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    Alie23:
    I'm so sorry for your father's death. Your story was well written and reminded me of when my uncle died. He was very close to me and would do anything for me. I'm so sorry again for your loss.
    Thank you. And don't worry about me, really (;
    February 20th, 2008 at 09:54am
  • DaschundPup2007

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    I'm so sorry for your father's death. Your story was well written and reminded me of when my uncle died. He was very close to me and would do anything for me. I'm so sorry again for your loss.
    February 19th, 2008 at 09:47pm
  • Josipa

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    Toasty.:
    I'm so sorry about your Dad. Death has always been a touchy subject to me, and I never liked to discuss it, but when I read your story, it made me smile. Not like in a ROFLMAO way, of course. I did have tears in my eyes, and I swear a few streaked down my cheek, but the way you wrote it... I can't describe it, but it's really something... I hope that makes sense. :]
    It makes sense, it makes sense perfectly. Thank you very much. I can say that I wrote it in one breath. I don't know but the words just kept flowing out of me.

    Thank you for your nice words.
    February 13th, 2008 at 09:32am
  • Toasty.

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    I'm so sorry about your Dad. Death has always been a touchy subject to me, and I never liked to discuss it, but when I read your story, it made me smile. Not like in a ROFLMAO way, of course. I did have tears in my eyes, and I swear a few streaked down my cheek, but the way you wrote it... I can't describe it, but it's really something... I hope that makes sense. :]
    February 13th, 2008 at 04:14am
  • Josipa

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    Boheme Shit.:
    It's amazing what such sad things can determine people to do. It's amazing how things we dread, things we wish would never happen, make people create such masterpieces. Because this is a masterpiece.
    I know that anything that I might say, that any comment I might make has been said before and my words won't mean much, but, in all honesty, this is the best thing I've read here up to now.
    Trust me, your words mean a lot, they really do. And thank you for every single word you said.
    February 11th, 2008 at 09:39am
  • The Lovecraft

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    It's amazing what such sad things can determine people to do. It's amazing how things we dread, things we wish would never happen, make people create such masterpieces. Because this is a masterpiece.
    I know that anything that I might say, that any comment I might make has been said before and my words won't mean much, but, in all honesty, this is the best thing I've read here up to now.
    February 7th, 2008 at 01:25pm