Crash Into Me. - Comments

  • me without you

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    Awh! That was really cute. I loved the ending, I thought it was perfect. They both found a way to be happy! And he's coming to live next to her. Great ending! I'm sad it's over now, though. :(
    June 2nd, 2010 at 08:56pm
  • Eclipse Galaxy

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    That was absolutely adorable!! I feel all warm and fuzzy now. =3
    June 2nd, 2010 at 04:01pm
  • me without you

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    Wow only one more chapter?! I'm excited to see how this ends!
    I thought the last part of this chapter was very cute. It's so obvious they both care too much about each other to just let go. :D
    May 25th, 2010 at 10:16pm
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    Ahh! I love, love, love it! :)
    May 25th, 2010 at 06:05pm
  • Deebee

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    great story can't wait for more.!*
    May 22nd, 2010 at 04:16am
  • me without you

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    Awh poor Madison, and Jake! That must be really hard. I hope everything works out someway, but I just can't see a way, unless they decide to do the long distance thing.

    'Even if she had to wait until the stars shined bright above, she would wait and listen to the waves crash together.'

    I loved that line, by the way. :)
    May 21st, 2010 at 08:04pm
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    Cute story. Good writing
    May 18th, 2010 at 04:15pm
  • me without you

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    Wow. That was really cute, the last part when he kissed her. I dont know what's going to happen now. I hope they end up together though. I think they're meant to be, but Jake did have a point when he mentioned Madison would be leaving for College anyway. Well, as always excited for the next update!
    February 5th, 2010 at 03:22pm
  • me without you

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    Oh my god, this is ending soon?! Noo! I don't want it to end. Its too great! :(

    This update was fantastic! I can't believe Jake might be leaving, and for a year! Maybe Madison can go with him? :D I can't wait to see what happens now, the wait is gonna kill me. I seriously don't understand why more people haven't commented this!
    January 31st, 2010 at 07:29pm
  • me without you

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    Awh! I loved this. It was just perfect enough, I liked how it showed a little piece of how Madison and Jake act together now. I'm excited to see if they start dating, I hope so! Great update as always. :)
    January 25th, 2010 at 08:11am
  • daggers

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    i've only read the summary and holy cow this sounds amazing.
    off to read the rest like yeah~
    January 18th, 2010 at 07:22pm
  • me without you

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    Wow, oh my god. Things are starting to get serious, which makes me happy.
    I can't wait to see what Jake says to that. Update soon! :)
    January 18th, 2010 at 02:22am
  • me without you

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    Ohh! I loved the update! Things are getting good with Jake and Madison!
    I can't wait to see what happens next. Poor Jake, though. I think it's really cute how much he likes her.
    :D
    January 13th, 2010 at 07:32pm
  • me without you

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    This is great so far! I already love Jake a lot. :)
    It kinda reminds me of the series 'Summer Boys', the whole concept of the beach and everything.
    I can't wait for the next update, subscribed!
    January 9th, 2010 at 02:00am
  • The Sun

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    Hey there,
    I think this story has great potential. Actually, I think your writing does - I'm just wondering about the story, I really do like it now but the ending seems a little predictable... so I'm kind of hoping you'll throw in a twist? Anyways, I really like the two chapters you've posted so far, and I'll be eagerly awaiting more :D
    January 6th, 2010 at 04:46pm
  • Chairlift

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    The summary was already amazingas was the first chapter. I like the originality of the story, keep up the good writing.
    January 4th, 2010 at 11:14pm